Sanctuaries of the sweet kiss and embrace

Best days of a life. When love is being born.

                               Sanctuaries of the sweet kiss and embrace.

My beautiful enchantress. It is a moonless night.
The gentle lights of the soft candles allowed my eyes to be entrapped
in the view of your womanly curves.

You entice me with a smile and a whisper "Come near my Johnnie."
You watch my face blush overwhelm by the sacred sight of a amourous maiden.

I hesitate knowing to harvest the vision of tender feet, long legs, soft breast and beautiful face.
Your laughing eyes blue eyes make me smile. A woman know to make a man wait. A wise man
know to seize the moment.

To ensure to travel the soft and tender skin of a maiden slow and easy. Learning and knowing every curve
and mark upon the ocean of her body. A rare view given to men by kind and beautiful woman.

My enchantress raises up off the soft bed. Her body looking erotic and tempting by the glow
reflecting by the light of the soft lights given by the candles. Fire red hair, soft breast moving and soft hands offering the paradise of tender skin and sweet kisses.

I hold the hands of my love and  I kiss her sweet lips. I hesitate and tell her. "I desire to put lotion of lavender
 upon you from feet to soft shoulders. I want to touch and adore your body from feet to sweet lips. To know you like I know my path to my home."

My temptress smile and laughed. She whispered to me in a voice sweeter than honey. "I look forward to this
my lover. Love is fair. I will allow you to feel and touch all my secret places. The sanctuaries of lovers is fair. I must return the favor."

I smiled and whispered to my love.

"The night is young.
Sweet bliss need to be built upon.
Dear enchantress allow the mercy of the night
for us to learn to swim in the passion.

The moonless night tell no secrets.
True lovers can find paradise of love without fear.
To allow the heart to be fearless and alive.

The sweet dance of desire lead us to places
where lovers learn to appreciate the sweet kisses and warm embrace.

Two lover fall together.
Words are not needed anymore.
The sanctuaries of the sweet kiss and embrace allowed us to know.
We have lived and loved once.

                             Coyote




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Author's Note

Finally a new poem. I don't like the flow of tenses. Please help a old man. Never too old to learn.

Reviews

[emmajoy]

' The moonless night tell no secrets. ~ True lovers can find paradise of love without fear. ~ To allow the heart to be fearless and alive.'

As always you write with such clarity and sincerity about emotions, life.. rarely a negative word.. you capture light whatever and whoever you think about. The way you put words to your readers is absolutely you, John .. to alter the odd word here and there would spoil the way you feel and that would be so wrong. Read three times and can't see anything that needs to go or whatever.. truly.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you for the kind words. I like the old words. Give balance and strength to the poetry and the story.

[Corset]

Such reverence to a lovely woman who shared her love with you. That's beautiful, I wouldn't be able to help very much with structure or such but I very much enjoyed the tender flow of it.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Corset for reading and the comment. Hard to give reviews on all topics. I give my opinion if I believe it has some value. Always good to stop by and read other writers. Give them purpose and reason to write. Good to know someone is reading your words.

[Corset]

I love finding new poets or when they find me :) I've subscribed so i can come back for more later :)

[No one in particular]

The images created are aesthetically appreciable. I enjoyed the poem, though, frankly, it is rather trite, thematically.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you for reading and the comment. Old memories become sweeter with time and distance.

[Rose of many colours]

Sorry I am weak in grammer.But you are a qualified artist,You have pennned the art of love and passion with finesse,I like this approach you took. It is unique and transparent.Your enchantress will be spellbound a constant..

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you. Just a free form poem on a old memory.

[Rose of many colours]

God bless have a great day

[Kemenza Harris]

Poetry is about expression, you do not need to care too much about flow. Some of the most beautiful writings come from writing freely without trying to complicate things. Good just the way it is

[Kemenza Harris]

Savoring every moment rather than thrusting and saying good night. A beautiful poem that doesn't dwell on the vulgarity of sex but the tenderness of romance. Good Job!

[Coyote Poetry]

Good poetry allowed the reader to use their imagination. Too much can chase away the young reader. Thank you for reading and the comment.

[Sami Khalil]

An enchanting poem for an enchantress . You weave words and imagery splendidly...:)................

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Sami. I appreciate the kind words.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...Any time...:)...............

[Pryde Foltz]

The sanctuaries of the sweet kiss and embrace allowed us to know.
We have lived and loved once.

They do, indeed, Coyote. Lovely write.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Pryde for your kind words. We cannot forget the sweet kisses and tender embraces. Best part of a life.

[quinfinn]

when you compose poetry such as this, flow is measured by the message and the tenderness. people who wrap their minds around technicalities lose meaning. this is excellent.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you my friend. Poetry with meaning and purpose is rarely perfect. Thank you for reading and the comment.

[quinfinn]

always a pleasure and a privilege