Sweet bondage.

Many kinds of beauty. Elixir of the sweet kiss and to get lost in the eye of the woman with the sea in her clear blue eyes.

                       Sweet bondage

Blessed are the lovers unafraid of the long night.
Mending and altering their dreams for the tenderness of the sweet kiss
and long embrace.

Allowing Leonard Cohen song. "lady midnight" to lead two people to find a retreat
in the privacy of secret passion and new emotions.

Sweet red wine nourished the desire  to the splendour of two people opening
new doors never to be closed.

The lover caressed her soft and tender feet. Slowly removing garment of clothing from his love.
Enjoying the exquisite of glistening  soft skin and beautiful blue eyes asking for more.

The final piece of clothing slipped to her feet.
The young lovers knew.The sweet bondage of the  embrace.
Two people with nothing to hide.
Must swim in the harvest of passion.

Long nights lead to long days.
The kiss gain strength till the lovers learn.
They have reached the ending.

The mercy of love is fair.
The sweet bondage will not be forgotten.
In sweet dreams.
A old man watches a sleeping garment fall to the ground of a blue eyes beauty.
He feel weak and content to know.

He was once fearless in the dance of love.

                               Coyote



 

Author's Note

Good to be fearless in the dance of love and life.

Reviews

[Astrid]

Lovely, romantic, and elegantly tasteful.Must say, the title made the think something a little kinkier :P

3rd stanza: perhaps change "splendid" to "splendour" to help it flow better?
4th stanza: "garment of clothing" a garment is clothing, having them together like this is strange; maybe only have one present in this line?

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Astrid for reading and the help. I do appreciate.

[Astrid]

No problem :) Happy to help

[Astrid]

Second to last line: "He feel weak and content to know." maybe change to "feels"?

[Art Sun]

nicely written poem Coyote...sometimes that fearless emotion can take you close to heavenly love...

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Art. Good to be fearless in life and love.

[emmajoy]

Live for the day, eat well of life and all it offers, and thus, make memories! Not sure where that comes from, but seems to be the tone of your wonderful poem. Life and love is to be cherished, especially the first deep sweetness of both .. its those emotions that pave our way, even the pains, even the tears. You write with such keen sincerity, whatever the subject.. wonderful.

'A old man watches a sleeping garment fall to the ground of a blue eyes beauty. ~ He feel weak and content to know. ~~ He was once fearless in the dance of love. '

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Emma.Good memories become better with time.

[Frieda P]

'Fearless in the dance of love', I really do love that...dance on Coyote, this is exquisitely sweet.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Frieda. Wild in heart and soul know much pleasure.

[Jvl narasimharao]

Really great.Very romantic without being vulgar.You peeled the layers of love very delicately.You are an asset to this wonderful site

[Coyote Poetry]

I tell the young writers. Leave something for the imagination. Readers like to use their imagination and thoughts. Thank you for reading.

[Dye]

"Good to be fearless in the dance of love and life."

What beautiful piece.

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you Dye for reading and the comment.

[MsJewel]

Fearless in the dance of love...such a wonderful thought...

Your poem is lovely, rich with imagery - two people with nothing to hide must swim in the harvest of passion! Great line! Great poem~

:) Julie

[Laughing-Bear]

My Dear Writing Friend,
It is a beautiful thing to dance, well written!

Blessings, Laughing-Bear

[KaylasPoetryBook]

Such beautiful imagery here, this was so easy and effortless to read. Well done (:

[An owl on the moon]

What a beautiful love lingers here...you always shine such lights of emotion and wisdom onto pages that have turned.. chapters written... Makes me wish that all could be so fearless in that dance.

[Great Aunt Astri]

Oh, but it is all so natural! Is is sobering to think that we have so may phobias and taboos about what is
part of being human! Good to be fearless in the dance of love!