Beautiful Brigitte

Beautiful Brigitte

A Poem by Coyote Poetry

Beautiful Brigitte

                     
              (Few people touch our hearts who want nothing in return.
               I was thankful 34 years ago and today for my blue eyes
               Angel who picks me up and allow me to gain strength.)




We open the door to our secrets for so few.
The rare person is allowed to see us in our
nakedness and unprotected.


When salvation is the strong whiskey.
Death is your only friend.
Tears and anger had create a wall of safety.
We are truly alone and waiting for no-one.


By the light of the German early Spring moon.
I drank the Black Velvet whiskey
and damn myself for loving too damn hard.


Karma led me to this lonely lake.
The liqueur and beer left me delirious.
I ran down the streets yelling a name this night.
That can be found anymore.
Sweet dreams that had turn to s**t.


I sat by the lake.
Waiting for no-one.


In the deceit and deception of the hunger of flesh.
We condemn our hearts to a distant place.
Pleasure and pain infuse our heart and mind.
We regress to just cold blooded animals.


The Spring morning light brings little hope,.


From a distance.
Sweet Brigitte ran toward me.
Holding bread and coffee.


She hugs me.
With tears in her eyes told me.
I searched all night for you.
Please quit the hell-bend journey.
Love eludes all of us.
Sometime we must learn to accept less.


I whispered I plays the Devil.
Swim in the carnage of use and abuse.
There is justice in love.
The karma will come back.
Cut piece by piece till we learn to dredge in the
s**t we gave once.


Sweet Brigitte looked into my eyes.
Brought me up off the grass.
Her eyes more blue then normal told me.
With your blood and mine.
We will climb from your self-pity and self made hell.


I told her my lovely and kind woman.
 I have nothing to give.


She gave me a gentle kiss.
We took a long walk to her apartment.
She puts me into a bathtub.
Rubbing me softly with soap and water.
Trying to cleanse my soul.


She stripped off her clothing.
 She lays her perfect young body across my body.
I caressed her waist and her breasts.


I asked why are so kind to a man condemn to his
own dreams and desire?


She whispered to me.
We shall always be.
You and I.


I have been your friend for many years.
We have enchained our two lives together.
I love all of you.


I will teach you my friend,
my love to live again.


I wrap my arms tightly around my sweet Brigitte.



Told her.
Thank you for your kindness and gift of hope.


It time I learn.


Love is a dance in heaven and hell.


                 Coyote
                7 Sept 2009





© 2013 Coyote Poetry


Author's Note

Coyote Poetry
A old poem and memory with a re-write. Any mistakes. Please assist a old men. Never too old to learn.

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This is the first piece I've read of you and I could immediately tell that you are a vivid writer. I could actually picture every scene from every stanza. Somewhat too vivid that I was aroused. Anyways, strong emotions and filled with memories. Thank you for sharing a piece of yourself to us.

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a beautiful tribute to your lady,your loves shines in this poem my friend:
"She whispered to me.
We shall always be.
You and I." Just beautiful

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

11 Years Ago

A old poem for a good memory. She was a gentle touch in my life. Thank you for reading and the comm.. read more
I remember this from before, John, and whilst your format has altered, the intense emotion is still there, the memory as strong, perhaps stronger. Tis sadly beautiful, my friend. Beautiful.

' It time I learn. ~~~ Love is a dance in heaven and hell. '

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Coyote Poetry

11 Years Ago

I'm digging into my old Myspace poetry. I believe I have 300 poems hanging around the old myspace? T.. read more
Alyssa

11 Years Ago

beautiful as always
A fine poem from a poet I have always enjoyed. Personal yet universal in its applicability, written with poetic talent and fine imagery. And a poet I like too for his gentle, measured and intelligent reviews.
Excellent.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Coyote Poetry

11 Years Ago

Thank you Leslie for reading and the kind review. I do appreciate.

When salvation is the strong whiskey.
Death is your only friend.
Tears and anger had create a wall of safety.
We are truly alone and waiting for no-one.

Reminds me on my own toil. I hope to one day find a woman like this. YOu are blessed

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote Poetry

11 Years Ago

They are few and rare. The good woman could be near and we are not paying attention. Thank you for r.. read more
"It time I learn.
Love is a dance in heaven and hell."

Nothing is lost in these words...

It's so true and epitomizes the passion of loving someone. Touching write, excellent! :)



Posted 11 Years Ago


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Coyote Poetry

11 Years Ago

Thank you for the reading and the review. When you look back in time. Kind people are more beautiful.. read more
Quill~

11 Years Ago

indeed! my pleasure, Coyote. :)
Reminds of sweet true love,
The fairy tale love,
Honest and kind.
Always ready to give...
I enjoyed reading such a light, beautiful and yet another lovely poem! :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Coyote Poetry

11 Years Ago

Thank you Rafia for reading and the comment. You are very kind.
Sweet Brigitte, I would add her name yet again at the poems end just to give her your kiss.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is beautiful I like how it tells a story and its just amazing thanks for writing

Posted 11 Years Ago


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"Love is a dance in heaven and hell."

What more can I say? This is all true, Coyote. Love is a dance both in heaven and in hell. In loving, we find joy...which sometimes leads us to sadness in the end. Love is really unexplainable, but we, as lovers, just follow the flow, whether we are called blind and deaf.

Well-penned. Bravo!


Posted 11 Years Ago


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wow. this is such an intense and beautiful poem. it tells a story and a story that is rare. not everyone can understand the truth of love. for they live with remorse instead. "When salvation is the strong whiskey.
Death is your only friend.
Tears and anger had create a wall of safety.
We are truly alone and waiting for no-one." My favorite line. Keep up the wonderful poetry.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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