Beautiful Brigitte

Beautiful Brigitte

A Poem by Coyote Poetry

Beautiful Brigitte

                     
              (Few people touch our hearts who want nothing in return.
               I was thankful 34 years ago and today for my blue eyes
               Angel who picks me up and allow me to gain strength.)




We open the door to our secrets for so few.
The rare person is allowed to see us in our
nakedness and unprotected.


When salvation is the strong whiskey.
Death is your only friend.
Tears and anger had create a wall of safety.
We are truly alone and waiting for no-one.


By the light of the German early Spring moon.
I drank the Black Velvet whiskey
and damn myself for loving too damn hard.


Karma led me to this lonely lake.
The liqueur and beer left me delirious.
I ran down the streets yelling a name this night.
That can be found anymore.
Sweet dreams that had turn to s**t.


I sat by the lake.
Waiting for no-one.


In the deceit and deception of the hunger of flesh.
We condemn our hearts to a distant place.
Pleasure and pain infuse our heart and mind.
We regress to just cold blooded animals.


The Spring morning light brings little hope,.


From a distance.
Sweet Brigitte ran toward me.
Holding bread and coffee.


She hugs me.
With tears in her eyes told me.
I searched all night for you.
Please quit the hell-bend journey.
Love eludes all of us.
Sometime we must learn to accept less.


I whispered I plays the Devil.
Swim in the carnage of use and abuse.
There is justice in love.
The karma will come back.
Cut piece by piece till we learn to dredge in the
s**t we gave once.


Sweet Brigitte looked into my eyes.
Brought me up off the grass.
Her eyes more blue then normal told me.
With your blood and mine.
We will climb from your self-pity and self made hell.


I told her my lovely and kind woman.
 I have nothing to give.


She gave me a gentle kiss.
We took a long walk to her apartment.
She puts me into a bathtub.
Rubbing me softly with soap and water.
Trying to cleanse my soul.


She stripped off her clothing.
 She lays her perfect young body across my body.
I caressed her waist and her breasts.


I asked why are so kind to a man condemn to his
own dreams and desire?


She whispered to me.
We shall always be.
You and I.


I have been your friend for many years.
We have enchained our two lives together.
I love all of you.


I will teach you my friend,
my love to live again.


I wrap my arms tightly around my sweet Brigitte.



Told her.
Thank you for your kindness and gift of hope.


It time I learn.


Love is a dance in heaven and hell.


                 Coyote
                7 Sept 2009





© 2013 Coyote Poetry


Author's Note

Coyote Poetry
A old poem and memory with a re-write. Any mistakes. Please assist a old men. Never too old to learn.

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This is the first piece I've read of you and I could immediately tell that you are a vivid writer. I could actually picture every scene from every stanza. Somewhat too vivid that I was aroused. Anyways, strong emotions and filled with memories. Thank you for sharing a piece of yourself to us.

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You've had quite a ride in hell coyote. You are a very lucky man to have someone like that in your life. Men prey for a women like that. She is your angel for sure. Whiskey can tear the gut apart little by little and consume the minds of those in a poor state. You've survived through the intervention of a wonderful woman. Great write.

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Coyote Poetry

11 Years Ago

You are correct. We need kind people to pick us up sometime. Thank you for reading and the comment.
Relic

11 Years Ago

You're welcome Coyote.
its really good! I don't think I could ever write a poem like that. I actually can't write poems at all... Either way it was very good

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Loved reading this piece.....''Love is a dance in heaven and hell.''
The last line is one I'll probably remember and think about whenever I think about love. Awesome!

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Coyote Poetry

11 Years Ago

Thank you for reading and the comment. Love is hard to control and understand. A wise person enjoy t.. read more
Beautiful write full of sadness pain and hope , I think I have read it before it deserves more then one read, vivid writing.

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This is probably the longest piece i've read from you but I gotta admit, damn it was a good read. It's so filled with emotion and sentiment that its honestly amazing.

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Coyote Poetry

11 Years Ago

Thank you Cole for reading. I was told. I write epic poetry. I'm long winded.
wonderful truly wonderful!

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Rae
This is incredibly beautiful, and it seems like there is a lot of emotion underneath all of these words, and I could tell. The greatest thing you can do when you write poetry is to write things that throw your heart and soul into the words, and I can tell you did that hear. Amazing.

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Coyote Poetry

11 Years Ago

Thank you Harley. Good to release the words to paper. Allow the memories to come alive again.
That is very nice and sweet. I think alot of thought has gone into this one. Consider not alot of poets write as much as you have :)

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Coyote Poetry

11 Years Ago

With age. We have stored away many good memories. This was a re-write of a poem written for a kind w.. read more
You really have a lot of stamina as a poet a lot of poets I see on this website are afraid to write more than 10 or 15 lines. You are very talented and should keep writing.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is the first piece I've read of you and I could immediately tell that you are a vivid writer. I could actually picture every scene from every stanza. Somewhat too vivid that I was aroused. Anyways, strong emotions and filled with memories. Thank you for sharing a piece of yourself to us.

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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