Around and around we go.

Around and around we go.

A Poem by Coyote Poetry
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Life is chance and opportunity. Better to be kind and hope for a good ending.

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                      Around and around we go.

Around and around we go. Never knowing where we will end up.

Faces, places and situations dancing in our head.

Can't change the past. We can assemble the present.

The future is our option. Chose wisely your words and actions.

We pay for our sins and good deeds till our last breath.

                               Coyote

© 2013 Coyote Poetry


Author's Note

Coyote Poetry
A short poem. Finally a new poem. I tell the young people. Enjoy life and be kind. Tomorrow had possibility of change. We will need open doors and friends.

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Pax
"Can't change the past.(But) We can assemble the present."
How true, life goes round and round... its a cycle we keep on riding... we pay for our sins, its either in karma or in justice... life always throws a lot of choices, it is best to chose wisely... we may stumble along the way to mistakes or wrong decisions... but never forget in that way we learned a lot more on how the process life goes... Great piece my friend!

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Beautiful..

Posted 11 Years Ago


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We pay for our sins and good deeds till our last breath. yes. What goes around comes around. Well penned.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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And if you believe in Karma around and around and around we go so indeed choose wisely since next time your husband might be your mother. ;)

When it first started it reminded my of Gene Wilder in Willy Wonka

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Wow this one is so nice. I like the rhythm and the rhyme. And your Authors note is sweet!

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Round and around..we go..hopefully learning our lessons..so right ..open doors and friends !

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This is amazing i love the last line, not for paying for sins but paying for our good deeds as well

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Trip on the carousel, with the insights flashing by. Lovely.

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"Can't change the past. We can assemble the present." The past should be what we build from, not an anchor or chains to hold us back. Great words Coyote. thank you for sharing.

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"Faces,places and situations dancing in our head".i loved it wonderfull piece of writing

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That's a really nice poem, I enjoyed reading it a lot. You're right with what you say.
Well penned :)

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Coyote Poetry

11 Years Ago

Thank you annabelle for the comment. Life is simple. We need to think before we act.
annabellee

11 Years Ago

You're most welcome :)

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A Poet and writer who love to read and write. My pleasure is reading about the bad and good in a life. Also to honor the Poets/Writers of the past by reading their words. Remember .. more..

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