Man up or Woman up.

Tire of people who have too much time to cry and complain.

Man up or Woman up.

I'm tire of hearing about Tate.
This is a poetry site.
For words to be enjoyed.

Tire of the crying, moaning and useless words.
This isn't a message center.
Need a hot date.
Find a dating service.

Living, dying and trying to spread separation.
Just move on.
Man up or Woman up.
No room for tender hearts.
I asked for honest opinions.
I been told. Learn to write by the best writer's on the site.

I Man's up.
Tried to write better.
Thank you for the honest reviews.
Want no negative words or review.
Leave comment and rating deleted.

If Hemingway was alive.
He would tell you.
Man up and learn to accept criticism with a open mind.

No-one like a crybaby.

Tate is a good man. He isn't perfect.
I'm far from a perfect writer.
I write on most of my poetry.

Never too old to learn.
Please assist a old writer with mistakes.
I accept the help with thankfulness.

                       Coyote

Author's Note

Time to become a writing site again. Not a popularity contest or a bitch session..

Reviews

[David Scott]

I found this poem ironic...
It is a poem that becomes a personal rant. The very thing your poem is attacking.
The grammar give me the flavor of cultural dialect instead of "proper" English and I will assume that was your intent.
I had to smile at this circle of human behavior...
We are so much alike and we have so much trouble admitting it.
I understand you premise and I understand your frustrations, but I love this site. The good, bad and the ugly. This is human interaction with a lot of the filters removed. It is bound to get messy from time to time.
Keep writing your heart and this will be a writing site...

[Baby Ricochet]

Great words Coyote. Great words indeed.

[Barbara Walker]

Constructive criticism is what writing groups are all about. If it's constructive it can be said in a nice positive way. If someone wants their stuff read, but no comment or rating, they should state that in their author notes. Sticks and stones can break bones and words can hurt like hell. Give them in the way you'd want to hear them, which just follows that golden rule that applies to life.

[Ashli The Amazing]

Great Author's note. Haha. I agree with what you have to say. No one likes a cry baby. I respect that you speak your mind.

[A. H. Pinley]

Agree 100% Coyote! I don't do poetry, but I write. That's what works for me.

[Just Kim]

You are so right here, much agree with your authors note.
Much enjoyed this Coyote : )

[Shivam Murari]

First thing first, you have discussed the innocence of the poet so nicely with grammatically not-so-correct phrases like "I'm tire of hearing...", "I been told...", "I Man...". Then the honest emotions of the cry baby has been so nicely depicted. I like this poem. Into my library! :)

[Holly Mason]

had to read with that title
wasn't expecting the contents-but enjoyed them tremendously
example- this past few weeks I have been given wonderful advice on this site that I will hold sacred forever-
first- I give to much away in the beginning of a story-they were right love the advice
second- I can be to deep in my meanings and it may turn readers away- love this as well
so much we can learn...with an open mind*)
thank you fine sir

[Coyote Poetry]

Good to have a open mind. We can learn from each other. Thank you reading and your thoughts.

[The dark story]

you're too humble ...your verses speaks for you!!
"Man up and learn to accept criticism with a open mind."...actually criticism have an impeccable effect if it's taken with the positive attitude...very well said as always!

[Tate Morgan]

Amen as well! Thank you!

[Muse]

Amen

Enough said.