So beautiful

Old poetry. Good dreams.

So Beautiful
                                     (Written 6 April 1980)
 
As beautiful  as a early morning sunrise.
 
As bright as a full moon that light up a cloudless night.
 
As soft as a gentle summer breeze that caress our  skin and face.
 
Your beautiful face and smile make me come alive.
 
With each moment we fall together.
 
Is my reason to desire life and love.
 
You, my dream maker.
 
My lady,  my joy and reason to keep hope  alive and strong.
 
Please stay with me.
 
I love you with an open heart.
 
I don't want to control you.
 
For you to understand.
 
I need you in my life.
 
A lover, friend or what you desire.
 
Hold my hand.
 
Walk on the lonely beach.
 
let the days and night come and go.
 
Let's our love grow.
 
With the understanding . Love doesn't cage. It grow and become sweeter.
 
My wish is to see your beautiful face every morning.
 
To kiss and hold you.
 
To whisper I love you my beautiful lady.
       
                       Coyote
         (Very old. Reading old books from the past. This one jumps out)
 
 
 

Author's Note

A old poem. Please assist if had errors. Never too old to learn.

Reviews

[Chris Newman]

This poem has strength of integrity of the poet. It is a beautiful lovely love poem. Therefore I have to say although it is an old poem by age it is also a young poem that expresses love. I would say leave the poem as is. I didn't notice any errors and it is so positive.
from Chris Newman

[rnuff]

This is really Good Coyote. I enjoyed this write.

[Tree]

Rediscovering previously written words like this is like finding a hidden treasure. Only the treasure was hidden by you. A moving piece Coyote. And the photo only enhances further that beautiful nostalgia, reflecting from this poem.

Diego

[Akira Kodama]

Amazing and beautifully written. Though, in the line "I love you with a open heart.", the "a" should be "an", you already know why, I'm sure. Amazing write, at the risk of sounding redundant.