My Winter love

Cold days seem to bring people closer.

My winter love.
 
I whispered your sweet name.
My sweet dreams bring your beautiful face to my memory.
 
I dreamed of our blissful nights.
 
Kiss after sweet kiss.
Leading us to the paradise of the innocence.
Opening a passion that grows with each tender touch.
 
My Winter love.
You came to me on a cold December day.
You brought me into a raging torrent my siren.
 
We tried to burn away the passion.
Desperate to satisfy the desire of the flesh.
That can't be fulfilled.
 
My desire increased with each dance.
In the fire of emotion and sexual battle.
 
I hear a soft knock at my door.
I open the door.
 
 
My beauty.
My blue eye Angel with six wine coolers.
Wrapped  her arms around me.
 
Sweet kisses and warm embraces lead us to our secret place.
Where Lover's lay nude.
Heart and mind free.
 
I whisper my beautiful lady.
I have found you again.
 
I'm your and
you are my ecstasy.
 
I love all of you.
 
 
                      Coyote
                    4 April 2009
 
 
 
 

Author's Note

A old poem. Please assist if mistakes. Never too old to learn.

Reviews

[Empirik]

This sounds like it actually happened. Whether it did or not. It is a lovely journey through doubt or troubled emotions to extreme happiness. I love writing about life's events, even if they have only existed in my mind. Thanks for sharing. Wonderful write. :)

[Stella Armour]

the warmth of love can uplift any cold winter day. Your poetry is so full of love it is a pleasure to read...thank you

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you for the comments and reading my poetry. Poetry and story allow us to leave something of value for us to return to one day.

[Stella Armour]

yes, they certainly do my friend...

[Mariam]

I like the imagery) and the ecstasy girl on the photo is beautiful just like your poem.

[zainul]

Cold days are really divine.
You vividly depicted the romantic dream as a real event.
Enjoyed the golden piece.

[fallen.angel.]

Loving the imagery ~
Amazing poem :]

[poetic soul]

paradise of innocence...after sweet kisses..nice way of putting it across.. :)

[Damien Davison]

Wow, ha, I can absolutely relate to this. Great flow as always, beautiful write. Nice touch at the ending, great contribution! Always a pleasure!

[James William Dyer]

"ANGEL WITH WINE COOLERS" nice image. Since it's a winter love, maybe a mention of the snow falling out a window or something to lay that into the reader's mind, some image of the cold outside to contrast with the heat inside. Nice write

[*** Hey Jude***]

Never assistance needed to feel the words you write!
Your words come to life in this wonderfully delicate and moving expression of love shared!
Keep on Keep’in the love Alive my Friend! ~ Namaste

[Pradeep Nair]

"I whisper my beautiful lady.
I have found you again.
I'm your and
you are my ecstasy."---- deep set language... there is only love reflected.. no trace of lust... Old is Gold...