I don't want flowers. I need you.

Appreciation and real gifts of love lead to good places.

I don’t want flowers. I need you.

(We forget what we really  need. Need passion and desire to keep love alive.)

A beautiful woman is waiting for me.

I promise her dancing and presents.

I arrive home with flowers and candy.

Her eyes goes soft.

She whispered “Please don’t buy me flowers.
I don’t want diamonds or gold.
I just want you to need me.
 For you to yearn for my kiss.
 To be overwhelm with desire for my touch.
Take me to paradise of passion.
I want you to cry out my name.
I want you to rub lotion on her feet, legs and body.
Treat me like we are new in love.”

“I don’t want pretty flowers.
I need your desire for my kiss.
I want you rushing home to fall into my arms.
I want you for Valentine day.”

I smile and bring my lady near.

Kiss her sweet lips.

I tell her. “We will lay in bed till late afternoon. “

I promise to love her today and tomorrow. Forever.

Coyote

Reviews

[Andrew N. Farrens]

This is so beautiful and I feel blessed to have even lain eyes upon it. I hope the one you love realizes what she has and that the only reason this poems exists is because SHE inspires the love you feel. I must say that you have made a lonely jerk chicken a******s like myself have hope in a possible future true love, if any woman is crazy enough to put up with the words I write. SELAH.
I sincerely thank-you not only for good read but also for inspiration that things may eventually get better in regards to my currently non-existent love-life......
ANF

100/100

[Rorenzu]

"I want you to rub lotion on her feet, legs and body."
this line i think have some error. The use of the word "her" is a third person point of view thus creates another meaning. But I guess its just a typo error.

Moving on, how i wish that all the ladies think the same way like this. Not favoring material things in the world.

[Becky C Strukamp]

Beautifully crafted. This is the hearts desire and you protrayed well. Great write.

[marytownsend]

Beautiful, heartfelt poem! It flows like clear, spring water and I love the word "Forever" at the end! The poem ends, but the emotion runs forever.

[Phantom Heart]

I can relate to this one I feel the same way as this poem is written. Good form of expression, it is clear and written well.
I always think that there are so many people that forget love needs affection by words and touch. Thanks for sharing.

[Crimson Goddess]

beautiful. wish there were more people like this. flowers dont live forever, sometimes love dies and sometimes it grows stronger, like a flower you have to nurture it.

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This is a very beautiful poem. Absolutely beautiful. It displays how simplistic love can truly be without everything else in the world. There's no need for all the money and greed. Such a true, deep love of two people. This, sir, is flawless. I enjoyed the read.

Mind checking out some of my writing? Thanks!

[mandy]

i really liked this, coyote. i would rather have a foot rub than flowers any day. i want my guy to look at me when he talks, listen to me when i talk, laugh with me about the funny side of life, hold my hand or touch me for no reason at all, just to stay connected, and let our bodies meld in passion....a very good write.

[Barbara Walker]

This is beautiful! More men must learn, it's not that complicated to touch a woman's heart.

[Jaweena...Eileen Quinta..]

Nizhoni! Always a pleasure to read your thoughts!