I don't want flowers. I need you.

Appreciation and real gifts of love lead to good places.

I don’t want flowers. I need you.

(We forget what we really  need. Need passion and desire to keep love alive.)

A beautiful woman is waiting for me.

I promise her dancing and presents.

I arrive home with flowers and candy.

Her eyes goes soft.

She whispered “Please don’t buy me flowers.
I don’t want diamonds or gold.
I just want you to need me.
 For you to yearn for my kiss.
 To be overwhelm with desire for my touch.
Take me to paradise of passion.
I want you to cry out my name.
I want you to rub lotion on her feet, legs and body.
Treat me like we are new in love.”

“I don’t want pretty flowers.
I need your desire for my kiss.
I want you rushing home to fall into my arms.
I want you for Valentine day.”

I smile and bring my lady near.

Kiss her sweet lips.

I tell her. “We will lay in bed till late afternoon. “

I promise to love her today and tomorrow. Forever.

Coyote

Reviews

[Andrew N. Farrens]

This is so beautiful and I feel blessed to have even lain eyes upon it. I hope the one you love realizes what she has and that the only reason this poems exists is because SHE inspires the love you feel. I must say that you have made a lonely jerk chicken a******s like myself have hope in a possible future true love, if any woman is crazy enough to put up with the words I write. SELAH.
I sincerely thank-you not only for good read but also for inspiration that things may eventually get better in regards to my currently non-existent love-life......
ANF

100/100

[Invisible]

sounds delightful

[spiritwind]

Gulp
Very beautiful expressions of love and sensuality here
now all the ladies are glaring at their man
asking why can't they say things like that
see what you started?
you and your
gulp
beautiful poem?

[XxTheFallenAngelxX]

Treasure your intended -- they do wonders to your life. Don't be foolish and leave them and do something rash. I really loved it... Thank you..

[Andrew (MJ) Nugteren]

wow love it love it love it true passon and full of love

[Alice Locke]

This is pretty good. I really like the second line (a lot!). It's very Shakespearian, great job.
...Shakespearian isn't a word, but it should be.

[Neisha Ann]

Another piece that has me thinking about a certain someone. This is exactly how I have been feeling, and as much as I try to express these things to him, he doesn't seem to understand it. He claims to "know" women. He assumes we all want to go shopping for expensive and excessive items that mean nothing. But, the day this happens:

"I smile and bring my lady near.
Kiss her sweet lips.
I tell her. 'We will lay in bed till late afternoon.'

I will be so overwhelmed and filled with joy. I'm in love with my first love, and although he doesn't deserve me, I keep holding on. Because all I want is for him to need me.

[April Vickery]

Perfect

[Rachel Fitzgerald-Feele..]

desirous! depicts whats truly important...

[Coyote Song]

Objects like flowers and candy are nice but lack when they don't come with love, the love of the person giving the gift. Both are needed. Gifts without love or the gift of the person's love doesn't seem like love at all. Love is needed. I enjoyed your poem.

[Lunette Lariz]

Awww. :'') What a lovely write! It gave me goose bumps. :)