Why are you still with me?

Must appreciate the gift of love. Come rarely into a life.

Wife with child.

 

 

  Why are you still here with me?

 

 

Sometime you are so far away from me.

I see your sad eyes filled with fear and disappointment.

You lay your head into my chest. You asked. “Why are you still here with me? So many friends and lovers have left me. I can’t get anything right.”

I whispered we will be okay my love. If you fall behind. I will wait for you. I will hold you till all the fears and sadness goes away.

I have learn keeping love and passion alive is the hardest part of a life. You must give and give with all your heart. Then accept the gift of love with thankfulness and praise.

I bring you to me. I tell  my beautiful lady we need to escape.

Put on your sexy red dress and your favorite red shoes. Allow your hair to fall free.

Tonight we will go dancing. Tonight we will drink sweet wine and laugh again.

Allow the sadness and burden to stay at bay.

I will hold you like you were my last wish. Take you home and love you like you were my only desire and dream.

All I know is you make me want to be alive.

I want to be with you and wish to be with you till my last breath.

                         Coyote

Author's Note

Any mistakes. Please assist a old man. Never too old to learn.

Reviews

[Pax]

I really like your work, each of your work takes us to a journey of your life… to the struggles of life, happiness, friendship, love, war, and many more...
“ If you fall behind. I will wait for you. I will hold you till all the fears and sadness goes away.”
~it shows how your love is true and ever passionate.
Wonderful work Mr. Cayote!

[Aianarie (INACTIVE)]

Aww, this is very sweet and sentimental. I really enjoyed reading it. Great work!

[lee von cleef]

Dancing shoes and a red dress,let your actions speak all the rest.lay your coat across the mud, climb the fire escape to the roof together,kick it up a notch Caymus Special select, just don't let her see the cost of the bottle.Hell just sit on the tailgate and have fun.

[Star Wolf]

A very emotional and touching poem. I enjoyed reading this. It reads so real and so many of us can understand what you're saying here.

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

sweet and touching poem-your love is so real and true

[∠( ᐛ 」..]

Wow, the emotions ... The beauty ... The love ... The flow ... The ending! I love it all! The kindness and the love is what I like about this amazing poem, the flow is incredible too. Sometimes people think that its better to stay away from their lover, but when they stay with them for a long time, showing them kindness, they will realized that their love will never end :)

" I will hold you like you were my last wish. Take you home and love you like you were my only desire and dream." The best line I have ever read ^_^
The ending ... Just wow ... The ending gave me lots of thoughts and inspiration, I'm really surprised of how amazing one line can be.
I'll be waiting for more of your inspiring poems.
Keep it up and always be #1!!! :D
Thanks for sharing!
100/100

[The Refined Poet]

very, very nice... liked it as usual...

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Sometimes love is all you need... what a veery sweet and sentimental poem.

[Jvl narasimharao]

A very good story with a few grammatical errors. for example all the sadness and fears goes away.It should be go away.I have learn should be changed to I have learnt

[Amanda Dawn Sanderson-G..]

Your words are always so beautiful, I never feel the need to point out grammar mistakes or spelling errors. A love like this may seem impossible but you show, it's not. Thank you for sharing this with me.