Why are you still with me?

Why are you still with me?

A Poem by Coyote Poetry
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Must appreciate the gift of love. Come rarely into a life.

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Wife with child.

 

 

  Why are you still here with me?

 

 

Sometime you are so far away from me.

I see your sad eyes filled with fear and disappointment.


You lay your head into my chest. You asked. “Why are you still here with me? So many friends and lovers have left me. I can’t get anything right.”


I whispered we will be okay my love. If you fall behind. I will wait for you. I will hold you till all the fears and sadness goes away.


I have learn keeping love and passion alive is the hardest part of a life. You must give and give with all your heart. Then accept the gift of love with thankfulness and praise.


I bring you to me. I tell  my beautiful lady we need to escape.


Put on your sexy red dress and your favorite red shoes. Allow your hair to fall free.

Tonight we will go dancing. Tonight we will drink sweet wine and laugh again.

Allow the sadness and burden to stay at bay.


I will hold you like you were my last wish. Take you home and love you like you were my only desire and dream.


All I know is you make me want to be alive.


I want to be with you and wish to be with you till my last breath.


                         Coyote

© 2012 Coyote Poetry


Author's Note

Coyote Poetry
Any mistakes. Please assist a old man. Never too old to learn.

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Pax
I really like your work, each of your work takes us to a journey of your life… to the struggles of life, happiness, friendship, love, war, and many more...
“ If you fall behind. I will wait for you. I will hold you till all the fears and sadness goes away.”
~it shows how your love is true and ever passionate.
Wonderful work Mr. Cayote!


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Beautiful, romance shines, excellent pen upon this.

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DrD
Excellent work, Coyote

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I think it was a good poem but why did you choose to have the lines the way that you do.I wasn't sure if it was a prose poem. You just need to fix the line where you say " I have learn" you probably meant to put learned there. I really like this piece though. I gained some insight into how to add more of a subject into my works.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Now I have to go buy a red dress and drink sweet wine! :) Thanks for sharing, I loved it.

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So so beautiful, I'm not married, but I understand that sometimes one needs to escape, and that to 'keep love and passion' isn't easy. This is so brutally honest, yet amazing.

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Sid
This was an emotional piece and it seems like i got to see another part of your life...the love expressed here is passionate and devoted and i like those qualities in this world of frivolities...Great write!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Timeless piece my friend. another page of your life- sometimes i wonder if i'll ever have as many stories with.just as much wisdom as you put across. Thank you for sharing

~M.Babu~

Posted 12 Years Ago


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when women love we love with all we are. At least that what I think as I look at my husband of 23 years and counting. He is the love of my life and my hero. The poem is nice.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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why?
awesome

Posted 12 Years Ago


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i love your saying..keeping love and passion alive is the hardest part of life...this is really amazing qute..i like all the poem with the love and passion in it as well as care and loyality. i like the continuous try to make the loved one forget their sadness and sorrow and changing it into happiness.. this is real love..
thank you for your great poem..

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