Why are you still with me?

Must appreciate the gift of love. Come rarely into a life.

Wife with child.

 

 

  Why are you still here with me?

 

 

Sometime you are so far away from me.

I see your sad eyes filled with fear and disappointment.

You lay your head into my chest. You asked. “Why are you still here with me? So many friends and lovers have left me. I can’t get anything right.”

I whispered we will be okay my love. If you fall behind. I will wait for you. I will hold you till all the fears and sadness goes away.

I have learn keeping love and passion alive is the hardest part of a life. You must give and give with all your heart. Then accept the gift of love with thankfulness and praise.

I bring you to me. I tell  my beautiful lady we need to escape.

Put on your sexy red dress and your favorite red shoes. Allow your hair to fall free.

Tonight we will go dancing. Tonight we will drink sweet wine and laugh again.

Allow the sadness and burden to stay at bay.

I will hold you like you were my last wish. Take you home and love you like you were my only desire and dream.

All I know is you make me want to be alive.

I want to be with you and wish to be with you till my last breath.

                         Coyote

Author's Note

Any mistakes. Please assist a old man. Never too old to learn.

Reviews

[Pax]

I really like your work, each of your work takes us to a journey of your life… to the struggles of life, happiness, friendship, love, war, and many more...
“ If you fall behind. I will wait for you. I will hold you till all the fears and sadness goes away.”
~it shows how your love is true and ever passionate.
Wonderful work Mr. Cayote!

[Dennis Shanaberg]

Your work is almost always a very real powerhouse of emotion that you draw out with your words. This a brilliant piece that is in that same vein.

Put on your sexy red dress and your favorite red shoes. Allow your hair to fall free.
Tonight we will go dancing. Tonight we will drink sweet wine and laugh again.
Allow the sadness and burden to stay at bay.

That portion is of particular brilliance. Something of seeming triviality can make everything in the world seem to be all well again.

Always a pleasure to read you work, hope to have time to read more in the future.

[Cynthia Man]

I agree with WillyamPax, one thing I really love about your work is that I often get to learn a lot and the way you tell us the story and the different elements of your life... It always teaches me something and makes me think a lot... Ther's a lot of love in this poem, and it touches me a lot... great write :)

[Cerise]

ummm...overall fabulous...its senusal...very sweet...i felt something wrong with the line" I have learn keeping love and passion....may be you could edit it a lil..:)