What will I remember?

What will I remember?

A Poem by Coyote Poetry
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Life is long. People are many. What is truly important?

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What will I remember?

Days pass by.

Life goes on.

What will I hold on to?

Family

Family
Grandparent, family.
Love?
Love?
Friendship?
War?

Kindness and love is all we have left in the end.

A man with a handful of bills and children at his feet.

He know love and what is important.

© 2012 Coyote Poetry


Author's Note

Coyote Poetry
Just thoughts and pictures. I tell people. Be content for laughter and friends. These are the real Gold in a life.

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As days go by, what will I remember?
Soft and shallow goals,
Of wishes unfulfilled?
Or kind and gentle hands,
Family, friend, and kin.

Something that popped into my head after reading this.

You make valid points. Family, the ones you choose to have and the ones that despite being thrust upon you, fill your heart are the true joys in life. Time wears away all things. Only through family does anything worthwhile ever last.

Thank you for sharing.

-Caradoc

Posted 12 Years Ago


7 of 7 people found this review constructive.




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very sweet, and all true!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very true not much to say besides that i love the way you have organised the poem.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I agree with you. It's the people who've shared their lives with is that are important in the end.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I could really feel the emotion and sentiment behind the pictures and then the question marks.. sometimes it's in the reflection of the past and that one single ? that harbors the place where all the words of a poets heart lives...
Thank you for sharing you with us..xo

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Life is truly best live in simplicity with the love and comfort of the family and friends.
Wonderful thought penned here Coyote.
You moved me with this piece.
And the photos are true pictures of blissfulness.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I enjoyed it. thank you.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is inspirational! My first read of the day and it truly touches my heart. I will take this with me through the day and reflect what is important in my life, God, family, friends, and living with a grateful heart! Thank you for sharing. A Lovely, lovely write! Beautiful pics!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like the way this is set up. Full of true gold.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

What will we hold on to? in the end nothing I suppose, but we have the great memories, the things and people of meaning, as you have shown, along the way, this is a great from of poetry so open and unique, a great way of portraying your life - thanks for sharing, very interesting.

And as for children and bills? twas ever thus and will forever be that way I guess :-)

Great writing

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

you are absolutely right.......it is so beautiful and i feel like reading it again and again as it is short but full of great thoughts and feelings.nice poem!!!.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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A Poet and writer who love to read and write. My pleasure is reading about the bad and good in a life. Also to honor the Poets/Writers of the past by reading their words. Remember .. more..

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