What will I remember?

What will I remember?

A Poem by Coyote Poetry
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Life is long. People are many. What is truly important?

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What will I remember?

Days pass by.

Life goes on.

What will I hold on to?

Family

Family
Grandparent, family.
Love?
Love?
Friendship?
War?

Kindness and love is all we have left in the end.

A man with a handful of bills and children at his feet.

He know love and what is important.

© 2012 Coyote Poetry


Author's Note

Coyote Poetry
Just thoughts and pictures. I tell people. Be content for laughter and friends. These are the real Gold in a life.

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As days go by, what will I remember?
Soft and shallow goals,
Of wishes unfulfilled?
Or kind and gentle hands,
Family, friend, and kin.

Something that popped into my head after reading this.

You make valid points. Family, the ones you choose to have and the ones that despite being thrust upon you, fill your heart are the true joys in life. Time wears away all things. Only through family does anything worthwhile ever last.

Thank you for sharing.

-Caradoc

Posted 12 Years Ago


7 of 7 people found this review constructive.




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Wow, this is powerful, beautiful and profound in it's simplicity. Thanks for sharing

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

There are many things which I or any body should learn from you.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very heartwarming. The pictures accented this beautifully. Well done!

Happy writing,
Savannah

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

good pictures

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Coyote, you are so right and the ending is brilliant. I loved seeing how you incorporated these pictures with the words, it was as if we could see into your mind as it was thinking through the lines. Truly a beautiful presentation. Thank you for sharing this wisdom with the community and for setting up this beautiful little presentation of your thoughts and talent. You are very appreciated in this community for consistently providing your insight through your writing and reviews and for the consistent quality of both.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this is so sweet and heartfelt. I loved it.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You make a heart smile to see such goodness in the heart of a fellow human being.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Well said :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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A Poet and writer who love to read and write. My pleasure is reading about the bad and good in a life. Also to honor the Poets/Writers of the past by reading their words. Remember .. more..

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