This is more of a monologue than an actual play. I guess I would get up on a stage and rant I MEAN SPEAK about what it says.
On War
War is a
necessary evil. With such words I have angered millions, if they
cared enough to read. With saying so I have made you my enemy. I
believe in war. So now you think to fight my opinion. You seek to
bring out your own beliefs, opinions, facts that might not be. But
what if you do? What happens when you feel victory, true or not, just
at your grasp? Have you taken your points, crammed them upon me, and
cast me down? That is what you wish, to make me yours. To bend me to
your thoughts and conform, making you in the right. Congratulations,
you have made war.
I
believe in the act of killing our fellow man. I have never fought
another, I have never killed. You shall tell me that I am but a
child, a hypocrite. But I shall tell you this: I know of what I talk.
No creature preys upon man in a great enough extent to follow the
course of nature but man itself. Strictly scientifically, every
species needs its limiting factors. Something needs to decide what
will keep it in balance. Man does this do man. We are what hunt us,
we are what feasts upon us. The rabbit is killed by the wolf, the
wolf killed by the lion, lion killed by man, and man killed by his
neighbor. Disease does not run rampant enough to keep our numbers
down, so we must take it upon ourselves to end ourselves.
I will
not bring religion into this, because it has no place. I would be
speaking to members of all faiths, so it is best to leave it out. You
leave your god at home and I won't denounce you as ignorant. I am an
apathetic, a realist, and a terrible person. For I believe in war.
The reason for the war does not matter to me, as long as it is war. I
still have a sense of honor and sport so I denounce genocide. Since
we must kill ourselves, we must kill ourselves equally.
War is
unique to mankind. Yes, some primates have shown to fight in
territory disputes, but that is not war. There is no organization, no
structure, and no killing in such a degree as to make the very ground
bleed. Man has brought it to a horrid art form, and we alone remain
its masters. War is our child, to raise like the spider: we give it
our all, and in the end, we let it devour us.
On the
personal level, war is tragedy. It tears apart families, slaughters
children, and all other sorts of acts that most believe as morally
wrong. As sad as I find it, however, all must die. We are not
immortal beings, we did not form to live forever. We live, we fight,
we die. Our numbers grow rampant from pacifists and soft heart people
not thinking of the future. “Oh, but end the wars for the
children!” What future will we give them? One full of starvation
and strife. Disease and war are our limiting factors. When one wanes,
the other must step up. Given the choice, I would rather die from war
than disease. Cancer is a terribly slow way to die. Alzheimer's
destroys the memory, making one lose the will to live. I have
witnessed death from disease. I would rather a quick death, on a
large scale, than a few on an agonizing trip of torture.
Ask
yourself, do you want to die a painful death of organ failure,
crippling pain, lose of limb? You will answer, “No, I do not wish
to die!” That is because humans are greedy by nature, myself
included. We wish to horde the most valuable commodity to ourselves:
life itself. It is priceless, for it cannot be saved. It expires, and
it crumbles to dust. The light dims, and the hope fades. I am not a
defeatist, a pessimist, nor a sadist. I am an apathetic realist. I do
not care, mostly, as long we obey the laws of Nature. We live, we
fight, we die. We have our choice in how we follow this cycle, but we
must stick to it. Trying to break free only damages the future of our
species. Humans will die; how they do so is dependent on how they die
before. Shall we stall our own deaths, and ensure the future
collapses in a massive pit of starvation from crowding? Shall we
decide to follow our nature, and fight to keep us trim?
I do not
say that complete and utter war for eternity is a blessing. Nay, it
would also break the cycle. I simply claim that we must take it upon
ourselves to keep our numbers in check. You claim I am ranting, and
you continue forming your counter-arguments, your facts, and your
points. You continue this sort of war. Not the kind of killing, but
the kind of winning. War of the mind keeps us advancing, keeps us
selfish, and ensures we strive. It causes you to fight on, wanting to
make sure you outlive that other b*****d. So why not ensure he dies
first instead? Waiting and working are two different tasks, my
friends.
I shall
end this rant on the following notes, summarizing for my large crowd
of ignorants. For how could one claim to be knowing if they do not
realize what we need. Humanity needs war, for war is what keeps our
future ensured. If we seek to end war, we will not die fast enough.
Disease, a much more painful death, will run rampant and slaughter
our children in a much more horrid fashion than any gunshot or bomb
could. You do not live for decades in agonizing pain, every moment
filled with suffering and blood, from a gunshot wound. You do from
disease. So when you leave me here, leave with this: I believe in
war, because I believe in our future.
Just give me some feedback, such as do I express my points clearly, and do I give enough detail so you can understand what I mean, etc. Content-wise, sure, I'd listen to your response if it is intelligent.
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An interesting train of thought here: war fought purely for the sake of war. Conflict absent ideals but fought only as an evolutionary necessity, Darwinism with first strike capabilities? Forgive the witticism, I do enjoy trying to be droll. But even you acknowledge limits upon war, "honour" or sportsmanship. Your thinking is heavily influenced by Clausewitz - your title is inspired perhaps? - warfare is a political exercise, and consequentially an art or techne. I find between those two notions a tension; one demands unlimited warfare for the purpose of evolution and the other believes in limits imposed by political aspirations.
I also admit I find the notion of "killing ourselves equally", not to point too finer a point on it, terribly naive. And again contradictory, if war serves either an evolutionary or political purpose - two theories this piece accepts - and leaving aside their own clashes, it must be fought without remittance, fought to win; both politics and evolution play to win (to use the common parlance).
I have had over my life - which is an incredibly short one - had the privilege of having met several soldiers and victims of war: from a tryst with a Legionnaire, to a lengthy conversation with a former child soldier now poet. And all would disagree with you I am afraid, as do I. Before I get called a bleeding heart liberal, do not misconstrue I do believe in a bellum iustum but the notion that warfare should be waged simply to wage war is repugnant.
Finally to attend to the notion that war serves a limiting capacity that is essential in an animal species. This is true but I am firmly convinced of the tenets of humanism. Not of the kind saying: 'No animal could have done what I have done,' But rather: 'We have refused what the beast within us willed to do, and we seek to reclaim man wherever we find that which crushes him.'
An interesting train of thought here: war fought purely for the sake of war. Conflict absent ideals but fought only as an evolutionary necessity, Darwinism with first strike capabilities? Forgive the witticism, I do enjoy trying to be droll. But even you acknowledge limits upon war, "honour" or sportsmanship. Your thinking is heavily influenced by Clausewitz - your title is inspired perhaps? - warfare is a political exercise, and consequentially an art or techne. I find between those two notions a tension; one demands unlimited warfare for the purpose of evolution and the other believes in limits imposed by political aspirations.
I also admit I find the notion of "killing ourselves equally", not to point too finer a point on it, terribly naive. And again contradictory, if war serves either an evolutionary or political purpose - two theories this piece accepts - and leaving aside their own clashes, it must be fought without remittance, fought to win; both politics and evolution play to win (to use the common parlance).
I have had over my life - which is an incredibly short one - had the privilege of having met several soldiers and victims of war: from a tryst with a Legionnaire, to a lengthy conversation with a former child soldier now poet. And all would disagree with you I am afraid, as do I. Before I get called a bleeding heart liberal, do not misconstrue I do believe in a bellum iustum but the notion that warfare should be waged simply to wage war is repugnant.
Finally to attend to the notion that war serves a limiting capacity that is essential in an animal species. This is true but I am firmly convinced of the tenets of humanism. Not of the kind saying: 'No animal could have done what I have done,' But rather: 'We have refused what the beast within us willed to do, and we seek to reclaim man wherever we find that which crushes him.'
I find this very interesting personally, you express your views very clearly and I like that. This is a very different way to look at war and very interesting given the very narrow minded views of today. I find there are two kinds of people in such debates, one believes only in their God and believes that war is a sin against Him, and you are correct in stating that religion has no place in such argument. And then there are the War Hawks. You are certainly not one of them, they prefer to run blindly and ignorantly into battles, while you are more calculated, and that is certainly extraordinary, no offense, given your ideas.
You bring up great points and don't go prattling off like a politician, brilliantly written and well said. While I don't completely agree with you on some parts, simply because I fill my head with silly romanticisms and philosophers, I see your logic clearly and respect that.
And just to add to this little rant of mine, I suggest you read, All Quiet on the Western Front, it is a very well written little book that brings a lot of things like this into light. Pardon the rant but I felt it was best to express these things, thank you.
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