Had & Sappy

Psalm 27:14

 

                                                                                 insipid are words                                                                                                                whereas all virtue was resigned

                                                                                      not a hasty lust 

                                   no unearned miracles, but a slighted design

                                bridging the plague between 

                                                                                     wine 

                                                                                              and 

                                                                                                     whine  

                          entertaining oneself with the ideas of life in 1595

                                                                                                               inscription of love

                                                                                                               a romantically bloody crime

                                                                                                               tapering physical distance                                                                                                                         where heavenly souls realign

                                                                                                               despite Shakespeare's absense

                                                                                                               this amores as equally sublime

                                    

Reviews

[Odayin]

Realign, sublime...just beautiful really.
I thought you had some really great key points in this one. It really made me think about life whilst I also thought about how wonderfully written this is.
So much meaning...presented in a gorgeous fashion, really...I just love it.
As for your authors note, even though you said you've failed miserably in one specific part, you're still a step ahead because not only are you aware that you've failed, you also have the pieces to put together the puzzling solution:)

[MOON]

Great lines and format not sure of the context.

[afra]

the flow as amazing ....great write ...i love it

[Hester Vane]

Once again a very clever and engaging piece. I really enjoyed reading this. Well done.

[Coyote Poetry]

Nice use of words and I like the flow of thoughts. I had to read the poem a few times for the pleasure of the words. So many statements stood out in the outstanding poem.
Coyote

[CHRIS ANDES]

i really love it from the title itself
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[Dr. Wood ?]

I am not sure what this is about but some of the phrases are quite beautiful

[spiritwind]

You get me primed before I read a line! Look at the spatial arrangement of this poem on the page--it is what I do with my work. I too use it all to give it texture and emotion and intelligence. " bridging the plague between

wine

and

whine "
How well done is that!!
Your thoughts are challenging
your poetry divine.
I have nothing but good to say.