Had & Sappy

Psalm 27:14

 

                                                                                 insipid are words                                                                                                                whereas all virtue was resigned

                                                                                      not a hasty lust 

                                   no unearned miracles, but a slighted design

                                bridging the plague between 

                                                                                     wine 

                                                                                              and 

                                                                                                     whine  

                          entertaining oneself with the ideas of life in 1595

                                                                                                               inscription of love

                                                                                                               a romantically bloody crime

                                                                                                               tapering physical distance                                                                                                                         where heavenly souls realign

                                                                                                               despite Shakespeare's absense

                                                                                                               this amores as equally sublime

                                    

Reviews

[Odayin]

Realign, sublime...just beautiful really.
I thought you had some really great key points in this one. It really made me think about life whilst I also thought about how wonderfully written this is.
So much meaning...presented in a gorgeous fashion, really...I just love it.
As for your authors note, even though you said you've failed miserably in one specific part, you're still a step ahead because not only are you aware that you've failed, you also have the pieces to put together the puzzling solution:)

[ForeverNever]

The title caught my attention right off!
The style was unique and different.
A wonderful piece, true work of art! Bravo!

[Alicia Schroeder]

A very unique and beautiful peice, brilliantly structured write. :)

[SHEEMA HUQ]

really nicely written, I struggle a little with the structure but i'm one to talk! excellent, thanks

[Ina Waltz]

Absolutely love this. The way you arranged the words duplicates the strength of the poem! Great work!

[Lily Mae]

This is a beautiful write and is unique with a great style...xo

[Leigh]

A beautiful and very interesting creation

[Kenneth The Poet]

Quite the weaving work. Love the structure and prose you use to evoke such feelings.

[Tomi]

B E A U T I F U L L ! ! ! !....

[Pencrafter]

This poem makes me both had and sappy. You describe a world of contradictions, disappointments and heartbreak. I don't find anything romantic about crime or bloodshed. It does create stark images and conflicting feelings. If that was your goal then you have achieved success.

[words of rooted design]

I guess it was just an attempt at referencing the story of Romeo and Juliet. In fact, I even had a more specific reference as part, though I found through my editing I was unable to make it flow. That may be the missing piece, untimatly the comprehensive one. :-/