Had & Sappy

Psalm 27:14

 

                                                                                 insipid are words                                                                                                                whereas all virtue was resigned

                                                                                      not a hasty lust 

                                   no unearned miracles, but a slighted design

                                bridging the plague between 

                                                                                     wine 

                                                                                              and 

                                                                                                     whine  

                          entertaining oneself with the ideas of life in 1595

                                                                                                               inscription of love

                                                                                                               a romantically bloody crime

                                                                                                               tapering physical distance                                                                                                                         where heavenly souls realign

                                                                                                               despite Shakespeare's absense

                                                                                                               this amores as equally sublime

                                    

Reviews

[Odayin]

Realign, sublime...just beautiful really.
I thought you had some really great key points in this one. It really made me think about life whilst I also thought about how wonderfully written this is.
So much meaning...presented in a gorgeous fashion, really...I just love it.
As for your authors note, even though you said you've failed miserably in one specific part, you're still a step ahead because not only are you aware that you've failed, you also have the pieces to put together the puzzling solution:)

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Just beautiful emotions in adorable mood. Wonderful creation.

[Glen Yumang Manese]

This reads... just like a book... packed with meaning and orchestrated in a relatively rapid amount of words to the reader... packs a punch... I must say...

[Alex Crow]

GO HEARTS AND FEELINGS!! This is awesome work. Keep it up :)

[Robin]

long live the heart , and the words it expresses

[Jeleseka]

I absolutely adored this. You're words flow as a river on a sweet summer day. The lust of which you speak is utterly true. I approve!

[C.A. Lucas]

You most certainly used words to your advantage. My father tells me that poetry is a good practice in using as little words as you can to tell a big story or paint a big picture. You obviously got some good practice out of this.

[soliloquy]

Well done. This one got me thinking.....

[Ed Fagan]

Again, I am impressed.