Last Goodbye

one star and one you

That was my long night

Even if I hesitate to say I love you

there were no lies

You were angry and so quiet

That was my long night

I can't sleep even in the dark

your sobbing voice

by your side

Even if you're just by my side

that I was happy

Don't even remember that fact badly

For a long day, a long night, I really loved you

You'd think it would be absurd that it couldn't be helped

Please don't remember me hatefully

I still don't know your traces

It's precious beyond erasing

Good night, goodbye, at the end of that

The time that passed seemed like a long day

we were deep into each other

i'm afraid of that

You are alone and so was I

The moment is our old day

As if the time we spent together had no meaning

I'll just make you remember

by your side

Even if you're just by my side

I missed you and I was happy

that was sincere

the sky is very cloudy

I have to make up my mind

the last voice

last goodbye

Please don't remember me hatefully

I still don't know your traces

It's precious beyond erasing

Reviews

[Carlos Lorenzo Estrada]

"Please don't remember me hatefully" this is such a powerful statement on love and its aftermath. When in the moment we never see the one who has our heart ever becoming an enemy. That the love built together could ever become corrupted by neglect or differences. Or even eventual loss of it. Excellent work Luna.

[Chris Shaw]

I do believe it is better to have loved than never loved at all, regardless of how fleeting or lengthy that romance may have been. It is always better though to remember with fondness and affection than with hate. Goodbyes are always upsetting. Thank you Luna for sharing a part of you.

Chris