Perfect

Perfect

A Poem by Luna

I want to be loved
Someone said I needed to be perfect fro that
So I tried hard
I challenged my limitations

Years passed,
I looked how far I came
Same place
It was a step in place

When was the last time that I smiled?
When was the last time that I cried?
Since when was everything a lie?
Since when was everything an act?

But, I still have to do it
I need to be perfect
I need to be the best product
Cause that's how I can be loved

I need to be the person that everyone loves

© 2022 Luna


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I think the desire to be loved is something everyone can relate to. It's not always an easy thing to find, but it's certainly easier than chasing perfection. I have found that sometimes, the only definition of "perfect" I truly need to work for is my own, and that it rarely aligns with everyone else's. Thank you for sharing this with us.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Luna

2 Years Ago

Thank you for your comment.
Actually many people get pressured and think if they do what peop.. read more

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Added on December 4, 2022
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Luna
Luna

Ho chi minh, Korean, South Korea



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I am a student at BIS HCMC. I am in year 8 and love astronomy. You can call me Bella also. My hobby is writing poems; I hope many people see it. :)) more..

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