Complicated

You are so.

Complicated

 

Like the math in my books

You're difficult to understand

Like the sea is calm, but unruly rough

Your mood changes often

Like the grass is green

You're never letting me know

Like the sky is blue

You're all "knowing"

Like I know I miss you

You're probably not listening

Author's Note

Be truthful please =)

Reviews

[Aliza]

good job alternating the begining of each sentence...and the repetition of the first words for each line is good...being descriptive is going to be your best friend if you are going to write short lined poems
try using a thesarus becuase then you can use different words and still get your point across but at the same time sound a little more mature....
but keep it up...
the more you write and get used to putting stuff out there the easier it wil be