Darkness

Another sequel to Untitled I and The Inbetween

It is done.

Do I regret it?

Yes.

I could've had a whole life ahead of me.

But now I don't.

Someone could've loved me.

But now no one ever will.

 

There's nothing here.

Just darkness.

No angels, no dead relative,

nothing.

The only thing to do in this place

is think.

 

Think about what could've been.

Think about why I am dead.

Think about who is crying over me.

But I bet no one is crying over me.

I bet they will laugh at my pathetic life.

They will laugh about the stupid b***h

who is now dead.

 

At least I won't have to hear them laugh.

At least I am safe

in my own little world.

Maybe I can pretend there are people here.

Maybe I can pretend that everyone loved me.

 

But the truth is

no on is here.

I am alone.

As alone as I ever was

or ever will be.

 

Reviews

[Gracie-San]

Wow, this is a fascinating topic and you have done well with it. Your words flow smoothly, they're beautiful, and you have just enough description to bring the reader into the darkness but still leave it mysterious.

I loved it. :)

[Cassiopia Summers]

You are an amazing writer, your words come so easily to the mind. Great write.

[J.S. Pua]

this is a good write, i think..
and it reads well..
good work..