Untitled I

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I have 23 more breaths,

17 more blinks,

42 more heartbeats,

My heart is racing,

My mind is blank.

~ 

This will be quick,

This will be painless,

This is the right decision,

This is what I have to do,

20 more breaths.

~ 

It can’t be that hard,

Can it?

Maybe I should just put the gun down,

Maybe life will get better.

14 more breaths.

~ 

A bead of sweat forms on my forehead,

Another tear falls down my cold cheek,

This is a bitter feeling

A harsh reality

5 more breaths.

 ~

A tortured soul,

I blink for the final time,

I put the gun in my mouth,

It is cocked and loaded,

No more breaths

 ~

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Andrew Wright]

Beautifully tragic. Definitely something I would love to read again and again (and I probably will)

[Dream Weaver]

This is a great reminder about a serious problem
Very well put together. A temporary problem but
the solution is final. Really good write I wouldn't
change a thing ......