Please Read!

Please Read!

A Poem by CassJoK
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I need alot of help to do this! Okay, I'd like some ideas for a book, and a little guidance from more mature people! My family needs the money!

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 Okay, I need help from you guys! My family needs some money so we can fufill needs. I am trying to decide what I could write, that might be publishable. Of course, I'd need guiance, help, and inspiration. I have no clue what to write, and if it'd be good enough to publish! I just want some help, and ideas so leave them in reviews please! Thanks alot!

 

 

Cassidy Jo K.

© 2008 CassJoK


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CassJoK
Help, ideas, and inspirations! Thanks!

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I know that most people I've met prefer fiction over nonfiction, so I'd start there. The way that I start a book is to think of an amazing name for a character. I always start with the name, and then build the character's appearance. For me, I give the character everything that I always wanted, but make it so that they have some of my flaws. Just think of a problem they might have; bad dreams that come true, being shunned for some reason, having a disability, etc.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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A romantic love story:

A man and woman meet in cyberspace, not knowing they had met in space some millions of years ago, when they were existences of the before. In past lives, they had crossed. She was a beautiful Quarter horse, and he was a handsome prince. She was the horse in which he rode, looking always for the perfect love. He found her, some lives later, some centuries forward, today, right now, on this page, as he reads these very words.
And now he will kiss her...

...what do you think?

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Okay, sweetheart, I have many ideas, and I can't share the ones I have for my own writing,
but I have some for you/Us...

let's see...


okay. Oh, first of all, I like your transmission to me, your reader and fan, of how you incorporate story ideas and build upon them. So a character's name first, and then appearance and situations, you say? Hmmm...interesting. I had always done it the other way around, in opposite order, completely. Let me try the way you specify.

Character's name:
Horatio
Appearance: Tall, six foot two, thin, brown hair with a bit touch of grays, this makes him more sexy, you see, and the color of his eyes are like a redwood tree. He is a Spanish matador. The bull he fights, his name is Ned. Ned is a Taurus. He was born on May 17th in a spanish stable to a poor family who come across their basic needs by breeding this vorateous animal. Ned is picky. He only lets Horatio win. It is because Horatio never tries to defy him. There is always something, an object, beneath the red cloth, that does not send Ned in a fury. This pleases Horatio, but enrages the paying crowd. No one knows this secret. A bull is supposed to conquer in defeat. They want their money's worth. They want skull-crushing and stomping, bones breaking, the back bent like a whip.
Horatio is magnificent. The magnificent Horatio...


Posted 16 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I know that most people I've met prefer fiction over nonfiction, so I'd start there. The way that I start a book is to think of an amazing name for a character. I always start with the name, and then build the character's appearance. For me, I give the character everything that I always wanted, but make it so that they have some of my flaws. Just think of a problem they might have; bad dreams that come true, being shunned for some reason, having a disability, etc.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on September 27, 2008

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CassJoK
CassJoK

Bartlesville, OK



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I'm Cassidy K, and I love to read and write. I'll put more up later! =) more..

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Love is... Love is...

A Poem by CassJoK