Awaiting for an escape!

Don't let things hold you back. With you there, you can bust a gold door with you pinkie for all I care!

Empty in the soul at first

So close to ending your dreams

Capturing a hint of golden light

Amped up with spirit, knowing Gods there

Pathetic locks you crushed with your heart

Escaping the dark room left in your soul

Author's Note

Please be nice, but truthful...somehow! =P

Reviews

[Christopher 'Windstorm'..]

Empty in the soul at first
So close to ending your dreams
Capturing a hint of golden light
Amped up with spirit, knowing Gods there
Pathetic locks you crushed with your heart
Escaping the dark room left in your soul

this poem speaks of confessed soul told it is destroying itself leaving nothing un hindered. it grasps the spirited souls that want to seek there purpose and understanding of thought within your own mind. but you never really escape... also you should fix format. but brilliant poem