Rain

Rain

A Poem by Heromen Selena
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It was raining earlier so I thought I would write about it.

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Drip Drip Drip of a rain drop
Plop Plop Plop on my face
Puddles everywhere
On the cobble stone

Squish Squish Squish as I walk
Splash Splash Splash on my legs
Water coating everything
Purging my heart

I breathe out just to see steam
Come from my chapped lips
Feel God's tear drops
On my skin

© 2012 Heromen Selena


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Heromen Selena
Critique if you like :)

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Jab
i liked it alot

Posted 12 Years Ago


Heromen Selena

9 Years Ago

Thank you :)
A sad drop off there but really good write, especially with the onamotapeias ;)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Heromen Selena

9 Years Ago

Oh I'll see if I can make it longer. Thank you for your thoughts :)
Rain is a blessing and a pain in the butt. I like the use of words and the interesting ending. A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Heromen Selena

9 Years Ago

Thank you for your review :)
Coyote Poetry

9 Years Ago

You are welcome. I love your work.
not good at Critique, but enjoyed this piece.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Heromen Selena

9 Years Ago

Thank you for your thoughts
Always had a thing for the rain. Enjoyed this creative write. Nicely done.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Heromen Selena

9 Years Ago

Thank you :)

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Heromen Selena
Heromen Selena

Somewhere Over the Rainbow, NH



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