Rain

It was raining earlier so I thought I would write about it.

Drip Drip Drip of a rain drop
Plop Plop Plop on my face
Puddles everywhere
On the cobble stone

Squish Squish Squish as I walk
Splash Splash Splash on my legs
Water coating everything
Purging my heart

I breathe out just to see steam
Come from my chapped lips
Feel God's tear drops
On my skin

Author's Note

Critique if you like :)

Reviews

[Destiny Crawford]

Really liked this!! :D

~Destiny

[Heromen Selena]

Thank you!

[Hidden Happiness]

i really liked it. its beautiful and its fun and i love the rain. oh n i like the god's teardrops part.

[Heromen Selena]

Thank you :)

[MusicLover]

Very lovely. I love the description. It feels like I am there. Keep up the great work

[Heromen Selena]

Thank you!

[luna11]

Very lovely poem :)
I like the use of onomatopoeia (hope I spelt that right), it's very effective.
Great write
Xx

[Heromen Selena]

I knew what you meant :)

[ghost writer]

sweet..although we are having so much rain here..youre welcome to some..!

[Heromen Selena]

Haha thank you! :)

[Shay]

i like the onomatopoeia

[Heromen Selena]

Thanks! :)

[Kiari Sabon]

its cute i like it keep it up

[Heromen Selena]

Thank you so much

[Kiari Sabon]

No problem :)

[Rhea752]

beautiful since a lot of poets don't use onomatopoeia it's especially unique

[Heromen Selena]

Yeah I like it. Thank you :)

[Pikachu]

This is such a lovely peom! c:

[Heromen Selena]

Thanks!! :)