Dixie Cup

Apparently this has to have the word Dixie Cup in it? I'm not really sure how this is going to turn out.

My Dixie Cup
I lift you up
To my lips to drink
Lemonade, I think

At a simple barbeque
Nothing askew
A cloud does not come
Every one sings a hum

The sun on my face
Warm and bright
Little kids on a chase
Oh what a sight

It's Easter time
This is a silly rhyme
Because I can not think
With out my happy-time drink

Author's Note

Haha, this was interesting to write. Please pretty please I know is was terrible. Critiques are much needed here!

Reviews

[Mockingbird]

this was a whimsical poem. i like the imagery because i can picture the scene in my mind. it's a nice tribute to a dixie cup. i feel that way about my coffee thermos.

[Heromen Selena]

Thank you :)

[AK]

Wow! Really nice poem! I loved the theme and how you expressed it, great write!

[Heromen Selena]

Thanks! :)

[just is]

i like it the way it is, you ought to enter this in my contest about "Dixie Cups"
Cute and simple. Enoyed this.

[Heromen Selena]

I did! :) lol did you notice that it won? :P