Flying Across the World

High above the sky
I fly with pride
Over every country
Every city, Every building

Passing up ahead
Secretive and with stealth
Nobody sees me
Not adults, Not Children

Seeing the lights burn
Against the dark ground
Pictures take shape
Twinkling In my eyes

Going in and out of clouds
The wind blowing around me
Lifts me up higher
Higher than the clouds

Going in and out of view
The people walking around me
Bringing me down lower
Lower than the ground

However, the sky I love
The sky is my home
It is where I belong
And it is where I will stay

Author's Note

This was just a fun write. It had no purpose to it and critique as much as your heart desires :)

Reviews

[luna11]

I think of myself with huge wings flying in the sky...
Great poem! :D
Well written
xx

[Heromen Selena]

Thank you!

[Kiari Sabon]

the pics in my mind from this its nice i really like it

[Heromen Selena]

Thank you for your review.

[PolaroidRaid]

I honestly absolutely adore this poem. You are such a talented writer. The words flowed and there weren't any awkward lines. My favorite stanza is the third one because of such animation and description. Way to go! I look forward to reading more from you.

[Heromen Selena]

Aw thank you! That means a lot to me :)

[quarintine_deathangel]

The poem has a fluttery sense about it XD nice write :)

[Heromen Selena]

Thank you :)

[Mockingbird]

i thought of an eagle taking an excursion and feeling his exhileration. great narrative poem.

[Heromen Selena]

Thank you for reading :)

[The White Wolf]

First thing I thought of : A comet flying in brilliant neon across the sky. Then, as it lowers farther down, gently gliding and skimming across the earth, before rising back up to the stars. And you know what? I totally dig it!

[Heromen Selena]

I'm glad you liked it! :)