Flying Across the World

High above the sky
I fly with pride
Over every country
Every city, Every building

Passing up ahead
Secretive and with stealth
Nobody sees me
Not adults, Not Children

Seeing the lights burn
Against the dark ground
Pictures take shape
Twinkling In my eyes

Going in and out of clouds
The wind blowing around me
Lifts me up higher
Higher than the clouds

Going in and out of view
The people walking around me
Bringing me down lower
Lower than the ground

However, the sky I love
The sky is my home
It is where I belong
And it is where I will stay

Author's Note

This was just a fun write. It had no purpose to it and critique as much as your heart desires :)

Reviews

[Mikayla Rasmussen]

i liked it i saw it as telling about how when u want to chase ur dreams and "fly high" people sometimes ten dto bring you down and it sucks and u know you were ment o chase those dreams but no one else does! awesoem job!

[Heromen Selena]

Thank you for reading!

[S. Michael Long]

I like the slant rhyme you used with "building" and "children" , "ground" and "clouds" they are both really easy on the ears.. (well at least on the minds eye lol) Loved it! good work! -s

[Heromen Selena]

Oh I didn't even do that on purpose! :) I'm glad that you saw something cool that I did not. Thank you for reading :)

[Destiny Crawford]

Loved it! :D

~Destiny

[Heromen Selena]

Thank you! :)

[Pikachu]

I wanna fly! :o

Great write. :D It makes me feel free.

[Heromen Selena]

Thank you for reading

[Coyote Poetry]

Would be cool to be able to fly and see the world. Home is always the best place to end. I like the journey and the description in the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Heromen Selena]

Thank you for reading :)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[Monica]

You did a great job with this poem. It's fun to read and I love the imagery :)

[Heromen Selena]

Thanks :) I love telling stories in my writing.

[poeticpiers]

A pleasant readpresented in free style. nothing to criticise

[Heromen Selena]

Oh thank you :)

[C4rm3lC0rn]

Nice poem its a perfect description of freedom which is what I would love to have.

[Heromen Selena]

Yeah I think almost everyone would. Thank you for reading :)

[MusicLover]

I love this. It feels to me that you were inspired by someone you lost, but can still communicate with. this is pure poetry. I love it

[Heromen Selena]

Thank you for reading :)

[MOON]

To soar like a bird , the freedom of it. Lovely poem.

[Heromen Selena]

Thank you for your kind words