Fluffy Teddy Bear

I love teddy bears. Mine recently got so torn up that I had to throw them away. I thought I would honor him in a poem.

My fluffy teddy bear
So old and torn
From me hugging you
On all the days I'm scared

My fluffy teddy bear
So used and scratched
From me abusing you
On all the days I'm angered

My fluffy teddy bear
So worn and faded
From me squeezing you
On all the days I'm heart-broken

My fluffy teddy bear
So high on my shelf
You protect me there
From all the monsters in my room

My fluffy teddy bear
So packed and shipped
To my new home
Where you watch over me

Reviews

[Summer'sBreeze]

what a cute write! I love it.

[Heromen Selena]

Thank you :)

[Pyrrha Rayn]

Oh, I love this! I have a teddy bear and another stuffed animal I've had since I was little. I very much appreciate the feelings you convey in this poem. It's rather outstanding how many people have found comfort in an inanimate object. Very well done good job.

[Heromen Selena]

Thank you for reading! :)

[Lina Grey]

I love this. I'm not ashamed to say that I still have my teddy bear, and I can very well relate to all the things in this piece. There's just something about teddy bears that is completely irreplaceable. This is a lovely tribute. Thank you.

[Heromen Selena]

Thank you for your kind words :)

[MOON]

Yup something comforting about a teddy bear.

[Heromen Selena]

Yes I agree.

[MusicLover]

I like this. Just like mockingbird said. it is an honor.

[Heromen Selena]

Thank you for reading :)

[Mockingbird]

great way to honor the loss of your teddy bear. at least you have fond memories of him throughout your life. very cute poem.

[Heromen Selena]

Thank you for your kind words :)

[Maryam]

I loved it! It's a great read and write. Well done!

[Heromen Selena]

Thank you so much! :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Even the toys of youth can get old and we must free them. I like the way you express the loss and the memory of the fluffy teddy bear. A nice ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote

[Heromen Selena]

Thank you for reading.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.