No More

You were always there for me
Taking care of me, nurturing me
Making me the best I can be
Then you let go of your responsibility

You say your world got turned upside down
That you had no reason to see the next dawn
Maybe you should have opened your eyes
To see what your choice is doing to our lives

You won't go anywhere, always thinking of an excuse
You go back on everything you said, and became a recluse
The sunlight hasn't touched your skin in days
And I can't go anywhere because of your haze

My heart pains for you every single night
My dreams haunt me, that because I might
Become just like you, run down and sad
That I left you for the fear for you made me go mad

I have a new life now
My life is a successful show
And now you come back to me
Regret of what you became

But no more lies and spaces where you should be
I'm through with your pain and suffering you put on me
If you come walking through that door
I swear you will be no more

Reviews

[quarintine_deathangel]

The words you use at the end of many of your poems seem to have a bit of a summarization about them and are your final chabce to convey all meaning. You're really good at building drama and power, just keep an eye on spelling and try to use better secriotive, fewer words that don'y repeat. helps things flow better, no complaints though your works are very good!

[Sunflower/Sara Kendrick]

Interesting work..I have lived with a grandson who has been plagued by depression..It is a very difficult disease to deal with..I can't imagine what it would be like to be married to a person who suffers from depression and is constantly down..That would be a very rough life..There are meds but some people don't seem to heal as well as others..Sunflower/Sara

[...and some ideas.]

it is nice and real.
I was trying to look for the fiction part...didn't find really..still it is ok..will be reading more..soon.

[MOON]

Poignant . Well written.