The Lying Mask

The Lying Mask

A Poem by Heromen Selena
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This was out of frustration and anger of a personal friend.

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You act like you own me

Pushing me around like a toy

Fooling me into trusting you

Telling me lies to make me feel sorry for you

For years I fell for your mask, your charade

But no more

 

You had me played pretty good

When we were little you would take me in

And pretend to be my friend

I'm not even sure you meant to do it

Meant to make me be so close to you

I was loyal to you and you treated me like dirt

 

Lies hurt people

That's just fact

And sooner or later people will find the truth

Or at least figure out that you're lying

You would think that there's no point to then?

No, you had to throw away a good thing in the trash

 

I'll tell you what, now

I hope that every time you see my face

Every time you hear my name

People telling you what a good friend I am

And telling you what a stupid, jackass you are

That you are just that

 

So go ahead and try to tell more lies

To try and cover up the old one

It will just make a big mess that you have to clean up

Piss people off because of the deception

Your mask has been split right open

And people are noticing who you really are

 

I have new friends now that have replaced you

They've already been more truthful than you have

You were extremely easy to replace

Once I figured out what you were doing

I walk past you by the corner, with no one near you

Tears falling down your face, and me with all your friends

 

© 2012 Heromen Selena


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i think it's good. but as a poem, personally i like to read a poem that has a level of intensity in its words. i.e. an implicit nature.
the unambiguity of the piece makes it too easy on the eyes and to simple in the mind hence the limitation for me to relate and feel any deep, emotional depth with the story you're telling.

the story you are telling is attractive because it is something a lot of people can relate to, i just find that you should explore the depths of your imagination; use language expressively to enhance it's intensity.

no one likes to be lied to, and the prospect of walking away from someone because of deceit is something you could us your words to formulate the true weight surrounding that scenario. stress emotion, stress ideals, stress temperament etc..

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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This is a brilliant poem. The beauty was perfect. I love all the poem you write, but this would have to be my favorite! Great write! :)

~Lizzy~

Posted 12 Years Ago


Wow!! I love this. It's so powerful!!!! I kinda feel sorry for the guy, even though he was a jackass. I guess that's the motherly instints overreacting. Anyway, Beautifully written, It expresses how strong a woman can be.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Eep. Lies. Yup they hurt like hell. And youre right. The more a friend lies to you, the farther apart you will become with that person if they dont fix what is wrong. But if the person chooses to fix what he or she did, then they might find themselves back on track and hopefully have been taight a good lesson. Very well said :3

Posted 12 Years Ago


i like it i wish i could break from the lies like you

Posted 12 Years Ago


i think it's good. but as a poem, personally i like to read a poem that has a level of intensity in its words. i.e. an implicit nature.
the unambiguity of the piece makes it too easy on the eyes and to simple in the mind hence the limitation for me to relate and feel any deep, emotional depth with the story you're telling.

the story you are telling is attractive because it is something a lot of people can relate to, i just find that you should explore the depths of your imagination; use language expressively to enhance it's intensity.

no one likes to be lied to, and the prospect of walking away from someone because of deceit is something you could us your words to formulate the true weight surrounding that scenario. stress emotion, stress ideals, stress temperament etc..

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

to maria: I already entered three pieces :/ sorry! I didn't know it was so popular until now. Thanks guys!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Wow. This is a meaningful and expressive peice.
I love it.
xx

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is true poetry. You should enter this in my contest. I love it

Posted 12 Years Ago


This poem has such a profound, meaningful concept behind it. I enjoyed reading every word of it. Good job!

Posted 12 Years Ago


This has happened to me. I can really relate to this. Sometimes its just puzzling how rude people can be! With their lies, faking, and rudeness! Im not even sure thats a word. lol :)

~Destiny

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on December 23, 2011
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Heromen Selena

Somewhere Over the Rainbow, NH



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