Opposites

I know that your favorite color is red

That makes sense because of how much pain you cause me

I know that you like punk music

Maybe that's because you are one

You think action movies are the best

Good, cause the only action you'll get is through movies

You love your pet dog

I guess a likes do attract

 

But my favorite color is green

The life of the forest

And I love country and ocapella

The genres with the most pure voices

Romantic Comedies are the movies for me

Because its the best thing to take a date on

My cat is the sweetest thing

He cuddles with me without any reason

 

So don't tell me your lies

Or even try to fool me again

I have all the proof I need in my hand

And that's the thong I found under your bed

With a camera in the other

Showing who you really are

With your true colors showing brightly

To everyone to see internationally

Reviews

[Shay]

omg I love this . thank u so much for sharing

[GreenQueen]

It seems very primitive at first, and I was a bit surprised by your ending. It wrapped up the whole thing very nicely, and I'll agree with PolaroidRaid that the bluntness is a wonderful tactic. I also thought your color coding that tied the words together was creative and something I haven't seen much of, which made this refreshing for me to read. Overall well written!

[Heromen Selena]

Thank you!! :)

[PolaroidRaid]

I love the emotional depth and frankness in this poem. Your bluntness not only exhibited your emotional standpoint but also a slight touch of humor. Well done.

[Heromen Selena]

Thank you :)

[MOON]

Lovely flow and format emotional write. Good one.

[Heromen Selena]

Thanks :)

[*~*Butterfly Kisses*~*]

Colorful emotional write. Nicely done.

[Heromen Selena]

Thank you :)

[Wolf's Dark Song]

A very powerful poem. Being cheated on sure does hurt in a very strong way. Its best to just get out and away like you say in your poem. Very good writing. Nice emotional impact here.

[Heromen Selena]

Thank you:)

[Leigh]

I find the image you create of your cheating partner quite humorous, the different colours are very effective and add to this and helped me read it. There's nothing wrong with Red, punk rock or dogs, but taking photos of women in thongs is absolutely unacceptable - Chuck him out :-)

[Heromen Selena]

Haha I just listed things that my former friend liked. I have nothing against the color red, punk rock, or dogs :)

[Coyote Poetry]

A very nice poem. A good story with a very good ending. Good to catch the liar. Hard to do. If you do. Best to create a separation. Liar won't change. I like the flow of thoughts and the very good ending. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Heromen Selena]

You're welcome my friend.

[Jetta Zippora]

Very passionate and beautiful. Well penned, friend. :)

[Heromen Selena]

Lol Thank you :)

[Pyrrha Rayn]

That is an amazing poem ^^ I love how you used the colors to convey the emotions. Considering most people associate colors with their emotions! Way to take that above and beyond. You always do an amazing job! It also has a very nice flow to it :) Keep up the great writing!

[Heromen Selena]

Thank you! :)