Dependence

My destiny is your fate
My action is your cause
What you do to me, you do to yourself
My path is the ground you walk on

My energy is your fuel
My person is your weak spot
When I leave, you know where I am
My breath is your life

Your future is my salvation
Your emotion is my purpose
Where ever you go, I will always follow
Your sadness is my storm cloud

Your eyes are my oceans
Your voice is my music
The beat of your heart, is in time with mine
Your happiness is my sun

Our lives are one
Our movements work together
Why do we try fighting this?
We can not live without the other

Author's Note

I actually didn't save the first version of this before my computer crashed so it's not the best it was before, but I still think it's good. Tell me what you guys think :)

Reviews

[MOON]

Good flowing write my breath is your life good line.

[Heromen Selena]

Thank you.

[Dr. Wood ?]

its frustrating when you lose a piece of work forever and can only salvage from memory, but this is great and I can only surmise that the one you lost was much better...Well remembered and WELL done

[Heromen Selena]

Thank you so much. I had to write it quickly on a letter rapper and I was forgetting three lines so I improvised.

[Dr. Wood ?]

well it worked...I have written poems on the back of sandpaper before now..you have to seize the moment...

[Rhea752]

IT IS AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i always thought the idea of two people being one is very cliche but this is written so well, so poetically i couldn't help but love it :D

[Heromen Selena]

Thank you :)