Liars

There's been some issues of truths going on at my friend circle.

Stories circling around
No where to go but into someones awaiting ear
Manipulated and morphed into something new
Started by no other than you

Arrow after arrow shot out at me
Always grazing me but never kills my heart for you
I know it's been you all along
My eyes have been blinded for so long I can no longer see the truth

Knocking me down, singling me out
Picking a fight with me, pinning me down
You take your words and move them around
That it's now my fault this has happened to me

How dare you accuse me of lying to you?
You are the one who began this chase!
Now you have the nerve to call me a liar?
Screw you and leave me be.

Reviews

[Shay]

this is a perfect description within a poem on how a lie can be.. you really captured it well

[Heromen Selena]

Thank you for the review :)

[Ana Drake]

Very nice.
First off I love the picture.
And the blunt writing style, is wonderful.
Great write :)

[Heromen Selena]

Thanks!! :)

[Elizabeth Porterfield]

I love the edge you have to this, a kind of roughness that fits the subject perfectly. You are unafraid to say it like it is and that is a wonderful quality in writing. I especially love the lines
"I know it's been you all along
My eyes have been blinded for so long I can no longer see the truth"
I know exactly what you mean by them. Beautiful write my friend.

[Heromen Selena]

Thank you so much! :)

[Elizabeth Porterfield]

You're welcome:)

[Wolf's Dark Song]

Very well done. Some people just a re mean at heart. Why else do things like you describe. Some people thrive on the pain they give others.

Impressive work!

[Heromen Selena]

Thank you!

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the honest and directness of this poem. Sometime being polite and kind don't work. A perfect ending to the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Heromen Selena]

Thank you for your review.

[PolaroidRaid]

Amazing poem. Really captured the emotion behind every word.

[Heromen Selena]

Thank you

[Amberway]

Very dramatic and strong hearted.

[Heromen Selena]

Thank you

[schnickythep]

I really love the emotion here. I absolutely hate people like this and it seems you do too, and this captures that perfectly. I really love the punch of the last stanza.

[Heromen Selena]

Thanks :) I might change it though, it sort of doesn't fit I guess you could say.

[MOON]

Forceful write , good flow last line not the best.

[Heromen Selena]

Thanks, i'll see if I can make it better.