Faith

This is a Poem I wrote for school... I hope you like it.

 

Invisible:

4 syllables

Hate,

That’s one-

One person to say it under the bleak and darkened sun

No one-

To stand up for what’s true

How about me and you

With hope as small as thread

The ones not to spread

The hate that degenerates human kind

Invisible is just a state of mind

We’ll bring them out of the darkness and into the light

The ones to save them from this fight.

 

The Rescuers:

The ones who educate and debate

Teach those who are innate

Show them what’s hope

So they’ll learn to cope

And walk with their heads held high

Towards the sky

My job will be done

When the light comes back to the sun.

 

The Difference:

What I’m gonna do

Here and now

And allow others

To care and share

And tell what its like

To be the difference.

Author's Note

Please reveiw my writing. i like to know if things are good- or not.

Reviews

[Alexis-Morgan]

this was very good. you can picture it all in your head. nice choice of words. I certinaely like this the most. its amazingg, once again. [:

[Colin H.]

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i liked this muchos
wonderous job
tell me when you has more, too

[Mysty Rayn]

I think this was very good. I like the comparison.