Canvas of Life

 

Astonished,

Lying here as one mind

Evolutions pinnacle beings

Bodies, the physical witness

Crystal and blind,

Energies told to stand by the creator

A separation amounting to the colors upon god's canvas

Life,

Our penultimate term to pure existence

Our walk through natures exquisite beauty

Who in the free world is less than blessed

Soothing notions of purpose,

Reason and meaning

Each silencing the worry of our temple's fear of loneliness

Reviews

[Amanda]

what a beautiful and thought provoking piece, Matthew....you always write with such grace. You did a wonderful job on this one, i just love it!

te amo mi amor @};--

Amanda

[Bluet_Belle]

:P

I agree with Claudia, this piece is peaceful(serene) and thought provoking. Its meaningful(as always) and it is beautifully written.
You are definantly the Elvis of emotion:P
You are The King of displaying pure thought, raw feeling,
You hit the high notes with happiness and love and vision of hope and elightenment, and you nail it every time, the reader FEELS it,
And you hit the low tones just as well when you show us sadness, that tinge of darkness, that bit of tragic beauty every now and then, and
You strike the heart strings every time, and make us think, you stimulate the mind in ways uimagined:P
You are the best:P This piece is beautiful:) I love it:P (but not as much as i love my Russian Kiwi:-*)

[Deborah Shepard]

beauty serne quite lovely

[Dead Angel]

mattie your insightfulness never ceases to amaze me. this is so serene and meaningful, i love it. very well written and described. great job!! *hugs* :)

[Deborah Leah Krempa]

Beautifully written poem. Thank you for sharing. Debileah