Stardust

A poem between Claudia Garcia and myself..

Spirits laced with physical

Emotions that are shared

Moments bearing olden fruit

Passions that are strong

Holding on, lifting up

Supporting each other forever

Eternally stitched, divines accord

Two soul mates intertwined

Arriving through further more

Exploring this beauitful world

Tasting here, feeling beyond

Living in the moments

Time unfolds before us

We live in forever

Forever lives in us

 

© 2008 Fallen Angel a.k.a Claudia Garcia

 

Reviews

[Pauline Marie Daley]

You've covered so many aspects of love. Supporting each other, becoming intertwined, exploring the world before you. Beautiful poem. :-)

[Silent Kim aka mizmetap..]

We live in forever
Forever lives in us
The last two lines say it all. it explains forever in a new lidgt. Very well written with much passion. Good write.

[SamBug]

I really liked this. It had heart and a great seat up for it's stanza. You did a really great job on this poem. Plz review some of my work. I'd like to see how you feel about my stuff. Thank you.


Sam... :)

[Nan]

This is sweet, Matthew, and written by someone who knows what love is.

Isn't it simply to share the beauty the world holds for us?
If one doesn't see it, how could we trust that they understand?

It's a really fine write, thanks for sharing.

Nan

[Adela Muresan]

I love the passion with witch you wrote this.
You expressed your ideas in the best poetical way possible.

*****Poem.

A.M.

[Amanda]

nicely done, yall.

Always,

Amanda