Who

Who

A Poem by forfila

 

Who dances inside of halls of shadows and mirrors

Stable and sane,

Heart moving forward in a state of mellow

The challenges Bouncing to rebounding forward and back

Caught in a live track

The us, this subtle clash

The way two different worlds interact

Our constancies and common responses

The issues and problems we each find hard to understand

A stand to deliver one grand and mighty plan

Kick back and relax knowing the only way we are going is to a better land.

 

© 2008 forfila


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We all need to learn to see the grand sceme of things instead of getting caught up in the tangled, self cneterd web most people spin day by day. Its not about what is, rather, what can be accomplished. I know that one person can make a change but its unrealistic to say that one person alone can completely heal the wrongs commited against us and the world we live in. But we can, united, make a difference and we all need to sit bac and review our potential, our power to make that change, within and without of ourselves. We need to just relax and see the big picture the way it was meant to be seen, not the way that is convenient or most aesthetically pleasing, so to speak...



Posted 16 Years Ago


a really nice write, Matthew...it makes a lot of sense. it is true, however....

A stand to deliver one grand and mighty plan

that is all we need....and we will see how it all will come to be.

Always t a,

Amanda

Posted 16 Years Ago


yes! kick back and realx!!! that's what we all need to do, have hope and know that things will get better because we will make them get better. great poem mattie, i really enjoyed it :D

Posted 16 Years Ago



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