Whatever you Need

Whatever you Need

A Poem by forfila
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On tip toes living and witness to this suspended moment
Closeness is immeasurable, together alone as one growing
Living in unexpectedness our passion is free hope
Our senses tingling from knowing love's true substance
Heaven flourishing in our hearts, the phoenix voice sings for us to dance

Your care, your feather touch, your mind, soul and your heart
I act to embrace, encourage and enlighten
Your eyes, your words, your energy and your art
I look upon in wonder, your beauty has captured my fascination from our days start

Never a show you front for display, never an act
Your giving so selflessly has me seeking to bring  mountains to their knees for you
My openness, my trueness and my intent toward you is holy

This leaves my tongue inept in its many diluting descriptions
Nothing I have is mine if it isn't yours
Always and on, I wish to stand beside you on this our course.

© 2008 forfila


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so beautiful the lines flowing , beauty in the love auars love

Posted 16 Years Ago


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This one is beautiful. It's what so many of us long for... A love poem is what it is. My favorite line is:
"Nothing I have is mine if it isn't yours..." Beautiful.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wow, so sweet, thoughtful, loving and so much more! i loved this! i bet i can guess as to whom you were thinking of while you wrote this ;) well done mattie, you're a very talented writer. :D

Posted 16 Years Ago


This is B E A U T I F U L!!!

But there is one problem with it:P
"leaves my tongue inept", not so

I think you put it secinctly(spelling?) Your words are perfect:)

I LOVE THIS! AND

I LLLL OOOO VVVV EEEE Y O U!!!!!

Posted 16 Years Ago


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