5 little 6 Word technique writes

5 little 6 Word technique writes

A Poem by forfila
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Inspired by the wonderful Candle In The Wind.

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Know light
Beckon hope
Show love.



Learn to breathe
In turn be.



Dishonesty births delusions
Virtues hearts truth.



Fate lives     
Karma lives
Reality is.



Riding summers breeze
Gently evokes dreams.

 

© 2008 forfila


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that was really cool i love it your great so true!

Posted 16 Years Ago


Wow! You're a real word artist!
I'm definitely impressed. You for sure are a good Haiku-writer too.

My favorite here is:

Dishonesty births delusions
Virtues hearts truth

Marvelous job! Some don't need many words to say it all!



Posted 16 Years Ago



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