Now As One III Free

The third and final in this series between the amazing Claudia Garcia and myself.

We head through a wonderland of beauty, where the flora stays in bloom and the fauna is always in tune. Walking hand in hand, such a place, such a time to be, here we are as one, the way it should be.

The wind blows into our faces filling us with so much creativity. The flowers filled our nostrils with sweet aromas and the grass was soft between our toes.

With every feeling so right, in heaven with an angel by my side, there is but one thing  that keeps us feeling bound. I turn and say, "Angel?"

His voice so serious. I look into his eyes, "Yes?

"Do you feel like I?"

I grab his hand and smile, "Such a silly question to ask. You know I feel the same. What makes you think otherwise?"

"It is just, we are so happy, so sure and so content, but i feel like we are hiding something. Do you understand?"

I place a hand upon his cheek and smile, "Yes my love, I do understand."
Her smile ignites one of my own across my face. "I love you, I think we are ready to walk free."

I begin to unbutton my shirt, as I remove it from my body, I begin to show him the soul within.

I see her aura clense and eyes glow. Her skin is no longer my sin. I remove my rags covering my chest. I back into her eye contact for it is here I am now relaxed.

I have finished removing every piece of my clothing, I stand before this beautiful man bare to the bone. I am showing him that I am more than just name brand clothing, I am showing him that I am just his angel.

I watch on as she casts her clothes into the past of forgotten memories, I too am bare before this angel. I am so proud of her, so in love with her. I extend my hand to her.

I accept his hand without hesitation. He has opened up a whole new world to me, a world I was scared to explore. He has shown me what it is like to be free.

Together we have found the pleasure of basic and true purity. We walk, I turn, "Thank you Angel."

I turn to look into his gorgeous face, "No my love, thank you."

 

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© 2008 Fallen Angel a.k.a Claudia Garcia

 

Reviews

[Touché Armada]

Naked in knowing... Thats what I sort of feel reading this sweet write you two... When you get to know people quite well and your guards have fallen down in a sense you do stand naked before eachothers eyes, and whats more it feels beautiful, about as beautiful as human form.. This is nice keep them comming. =)

[shadadakiya]

wow that was awsome just beautiful thank you for sharing that you all did great really great (:

[!!..Love..!!]

This is such a great write Mat!
It actually made me smile and I'm still smiling, thanks for brining this smile ^_^
Love

[April Child]

I have finished removing every piece of my clothing, I stand before this beautiful man bare to the bone. I am showing him that I am more than just name brand clothing, I am showing him that I am just his angel.

Beautiful..

I hope you 2 will continue to write together, your words certainly seem to fit.

[Bhavya Kaushik]

Very well written and a lovely collaboration I must say.
I loved the ending part of it a lot.
Great read :)

[Amanda]

beautifully written...a nice ending to your other two poems. a good collabration, you and claudia write really well together. a very good job. i love it.

Always,

Amanda

[Not Afraid of Bruises]

A great write - not my stlye but very touching.

[Amor-de-angel]

I commented on this on Claudias page. You two have done well,I like the shedding of the clothes to reveal your true selves to one another. Glad the group helped in getting you two together to write so well like this.

[Antony]

Beautifully written, you two have captured the essence of being as ONE, shedding your clothing of the past. Great collaboration.
Antony

[Brenda Sue]

Very well written. Great collaboration. Beautifully penned.