Hush Now Time

 

Ends, no ends, no fretting nor fear

The old steps of past tears turn past tense and disappear

No fear my sweetness, my tender look here

Here is my love with my heart and my care

The weight of a feather is this passion of truth

It is you and I with the spirits divine

Hush now time don’t you turn another page

To be, to stay completely engaged

Paired as one on this day that love came.

Reviews

[Bluet_Belle]

Here is my love, my heart and my care
The weight of a feather, this passion of truth

Its crazy how such a light weight can cancel out the heaviness of sorrow and the weighty stones of fear and anxiety that tie us all down. The scale is rigged...

Beautiful peice.

[Touché Armada]

What does one say Matthew when having read such a short tiny package full of most wonderfulness?
Wellllll? =D

Wonders off whistling happy tunes. Ooooops sorrry it was hush now wasnt it,,, ok wanders off on tip toes.

[Erin Phoenix]

Lovely.

As you can tell with my work...

I adore rhyme.

[Brenda Sue]

Oh I could almost hear this being read at a wedding. So lovely and romantic. Beautifully penned. Great job.

[Choosing Life]

Lovely and light..

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This is a beautiful Ode to someone Matt, very well put together...with clear connection to past/present and future...
Cheers,
Helen :-)))

[Candle in the wind]

Hush - this silence is eloquent , it exudes the love when time comes to a standstill! Great work enjoyed reading.

[Amanda]

beautifully written and a wonderful poem.

you're great as always, matthew.

Amanda @};--

[Dead Angel]

short but beautiful, i agree with penny, it does sound like a wedding prayer. very well written matt, i loved it!! :)

[Penny Ellen]

It sounds almost like a wedding prayer. Beautifully done!