Time To Be

Time To Be

A Poem by forfila

Moving through one more dance
Holding you in my arms
Living a spiritual romance
I have you
This is our time at last

No demons to confess
Love
No more
Or no less
This dream is so intense

I dream of no brighter days
Living now, for nothing do we wait
Holding on to your hand
Knowing just what we have
Knowing we both understand

Walking in this garden free
This stage of love, singing for you and me
The breeze puts our minds at ease
This is not the time to think
This is the time to be.

© 2008 forfila


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Ah! I loved it.
very beautiful and lovely flow, it really moved me and a deep write!
lovely indeed ^_^

No demons to confess
Love
No more
Or no less
This dream is so intense-Beautiful!

Posted 16 Years Ago


This is the time to be.

That sums it up, that is exactly it when you are in this stage of love. It fills you up, its delicious. It's a gift.
Lovely poem.

Posted 16 Years Ago


oh matt this is so wonderfully written!! i love the flow and the rhyming and the picture you paint with your beautiful words. thank you for writing this i absolutely love it!! :)

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Gorgeous! You write so beautifully, its wonderful. I love how much love and emotion youve put into this piece. It literally leaps off the page and into the readers heart. Who ever the girl is you speak of is very very lucky. One can only dream of having soemone to love like that.

-Court

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A Quite lovely and Beautifully penned piece so well Expressed~Fran Marie

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Like a beautiful dance. I could imagine two people in love, twirling around a dance floor out on a viranda, surrounded with flowers and a warm sunset.
Great Write! :)

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

another beautiful piece, Matt...it seems that the rest did you good.

Very nicely done.

Love Always,

Amanda @};--

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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