For No Other Reason

For No Other Reason

A Poem by forfila

For no other reason
I breathe to know love
For no other reason
I love to feel free
Walk with me
Talk with me
Feel with me
Be with me


For no other reason
I breathe to know passion
For know other reason
I love to love life
Live with me
Fly with me
Write with me
Climb to new heights with me

© 2008 forfila


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I breathe to know passion
For know other reason
I love to love life
Live with me
Fly with me
Write with me

A deeply expressed piece ~ WelL DonE indeed!~Fran

Posted 16 Years Ago


This is an invitation for people to live not just exist. The beauty of caring for others is a gift from the highest authority. You have etched the invitation succinctly and with love for your fellow man, I think that is very powerful. The fruit that falls from the vine is the sweetest...we should all remember that.
Well-written with careful attention to detail...
Cheers,
Helen :-))))

Posted 16 Years Ago


the optimism is refreshing. feeling free, flying, loving, breathing! What wonderful feelings! It reminded me of when I jumped out of a plane and I was floating in the parachute thinking how good all things were.
great piece!

Posted 16 Years Ago


THIS WAS REALLY GOOD I LIKED IT ALOT I LIKED HOW IT ALL FLOWED SO WELL TOGETHER ...SUPERB JOB!!!!!

Posted 16 Years Ago


Ok! I'm throwin you the rope! You hold it in place and i'll start climbing! lol :)
Wonderful words Matt! :)


Posted 16 Years Ago


I really liked this. Its simplicity made it all the more endearing. I too had the reaction, "Ok, I will!" :) This was very enjoyable.

Posted 16 Years Ago


After reading this I'm almost tempted to say- Okay I will : ), but as my luck goes- it wasn't addressed to me :(
lol

Really though- I love the feel of this piece- like a whimsical romance. I thoroughly enjoyed it.

Posted 16 Years Ago


simple and effective i enjoyed

Posted 16 Years Ago


Why is it you marvel at my work but I just sit here thinking... Why cant I ever write so beautifully.
You make me feel like such a hack =)
Always such a pleasure Matt.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Oh Matthew, so beautiful and romantic. Wonderfully penned. Great job.

Posted 16 Years Ago



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