My Adore

My Adore

A Poem by forfila
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*smiles*

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My sweet I adore you
Look a little closer
I have never left your side
My hand is still there
I still hold you dearest
In this truth, I solemnly swear

I will do what it takes to rest by your side
You and I, like minded in our fight
Doing it together
Always the strength in each other we find

I take you in abstinence
Will you take me in mine
The beauty of your spirit
Your heart
And your mind
All the blessings and beauty with you, I find

Take this truth with you
Take a still frame in the mind
I will never cease this quest
My quest to end up by your side.

© 2008 forfila


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This is a beautifully romantic write on what loving is really about! Supporting each other no matter the distance. Well done Mathew, I absolutely adore the first stanza, it eptomises loves strength in it's completeness. Have a good day, LLB

Posted 16 Years Ago


this is a beautiful poem...something to aspire to.

love you, amanda

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This was beautiful, like God walking with us all our lives, and hoping for our return to heaven to be with him again.
I liked it very much Matthius! :)

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very beautiful write, such strong emotion for someone you must care a great deal about.
So free, so pure, so loving.
Beautiful :)
xoxo

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very romantic and beautiful. Wonderfully penned. Great job.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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