Angel

Please my darling angel, will you go and do good deeds
Will you sooth a heart as it bleeds, will you put a healing hand upon their grief.
Please my darling angel, will scare away the ones of poor intent
Please my darling angel, will you be one upon whom I depend.

Angel, you are a mystic sight, a loving hand, a caring friend
Angel, will you be here with me till the very end.
Angel, do you understand your everything, or power is nothing
Angel, do you know I am right here to reflect your loving.

Reviews

[Bluet_Belle]

:P

[justjenn_2u]

Angel, do you know I am right here to reflect your loving

(I really think that this was a powerful statement). Very soothing to the soul.

[The Archangel Gabriel]

BTW, if you use Photoshop to convert that .gif file to a .jpg, it will show an angel instead of just black space. However, I like the black!

-Gabe

[Carrie Montgomery]

quite, peaceful, soft as a whisper. excellent writing. even flow, great rhythm.

[E. M. Murren]

What an interesting work. I mean interesting in the good way. LOL I liked this a lot. Speaking to our angel is a great concept. The poetics is graceful as well. Fine work.

[The Archangel Gabriel]

Wonderful piece. "Will you sooth a heart as it bleeds, will you put a healing hand upon their grief."

Oh, we all need that from time to time!

-Gabe

[Shadows of Sight]

Your words carry such a beauty. Like walking down the roads of life, talking in adoration of your guardian angel that works ceaselessly to cary you and your good intensions through life.
Simply lovely! :)

[SweetPeachesAlways]

Will you sooth a heart as it bleeds, will you put a healing hand upon their grief.

I like this line especially...very beautiful write all over, though! Excellent...

[Siddartha Beth Pierce]

Beautiful sentiments...I hope for the same for you and all. Thank you for sharing so much of your caring soul.
Light,
Siddartha

[Lia]

Nice piece. Good work xx