Allowance of Destiny

Tell me who you are
Tell me the secrets of your past

I will never harbor thoughts other than understanding
I will never turn my back, no matter what your words may reveal
I will never change for you, I know what your heart entails

I wish to go as far as destiny will allow us
Love, no lust, spring time, hugs and flowers.

Reviews

[Brenda Sue]

This is truly a lovely piece. Beautifully penned. Great job.

[The Archangel Gabriel]

"Love, no lust, spring time, hugs and flowers."

Yeah for hugs and flowers! It is not all about guns and torture any more! Great work.

-Gabe

[Melanie Jane Boicourt S..]

I agree with Cynthia. That was my favorite part also. I think that everyone wants to be loved for themselves and not for just what they can give someone whether it be thier body or gifts. this concept was very nicely captured.
Thank you for sharing.
Love All, Mejasha

[Cynthia Yildirim]

I wish to go as far as destiny will allow us
Love, no lust, spring time, hugs and flowers.

I love this part especially :) very nice. :)

[None]

Love is special and you show the way there in your beautifully written poem!
"I will never harbor thoughts other than understanding
I will never turn my back, no matter what your words may reveal
I will never change for you, I know what your heart entails"
These words of yours are so tender, hard to find in real life.
Excellent write!

[Shadows of Sight]

you have a way with words! Another remarkably sweet and endouring work of love and art.
But i think you ment to say in line 4 "may reveal" not "my" :)

[Amanda]

this is a sweet little poem.

it is short, sweet and to the point.

i love it!

A